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    critique and comments pls
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  • #2
    I'd say some of the cars are a bit too shiny, but other than that, Marvelous!

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    • #3
      the first image is great!
      the others i m not so keen on their angle views...
      really nice... i d just burn them a notch or too to make them more "vibrant" imo
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      • #4
        hi pengo, great reality you make there,
        1 thing though, maybe i am wrong, but i persume the horizon will be at much lower than what you shown in the first image, well at least that is my calculation.. other than that,
        fantastic reality you have there.

        blue line : your horizon
        red line,horizon, i think where it's supposed to be
        Dominique Laksmana

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        • #5
          U r absolutely right about perspective dominiquelaksmana but the line is not proper the orizon but the top border of one of the cylinder for the plants (a bug problem I think it is, i found when i do tho cylinders one inside another with alpha maps in opacity channels)
          ANyway I have to say my horizon in scene should be not so high as u drawn in your image and the plants are on the plane so have to be not so wrong

          Happy proper u found it realistic because your works are really good u are one of the reference i look always your nice images


          thanks
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          • #6
            aaaaaah i see.....
            now i get it, forgive me for taking that line as horizon
            Dominique Laksmana

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            • #7
              no problem u noticed rapidly the artifact I got
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              • #8
                I think with a bit of photoshop you could quite easily turn that artifact into a nice cloud.

                Very nice sunny images Pengo, but agree with Amer about the cars.
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                • #9
                  Thanks mcvltd I'll correct them
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                  • #10
                    http://img518.imageshack.us/my.php?i...6resizelg0.jpg
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                    • #11
                      can't see your image pengo there's a red x
                      Dominique Laksmana

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                      • #12
                        corret link

                        Really sorry to all for the mistake on link I wrote


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                        • #13
                          i would skeeze in some more contrast...its a bit whased out imo
                          also the brick walls would work out better if displaced and the hedge end on the right is not displaced?
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                          • #14
                            real nice pengo!
                            Dominique Laksmana

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                            • #15
                              Exterior ~ cars

                              I have not seen nicer cars. What library?
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