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[Helge]

First architectural rendrings this year

c&c welcome



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Hi res...
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[sv]

First architectural rendrings this year

jesus; do more!

amazing.

[tct70]

Very nice............

[MHenry]

Interior rendering is very nice!

[Pixelab]

Interior is indeed very nice, well populated in furniture... lack of some users maybe

Exterior is too flat IMO, I know this is a difficult one, because of the flat facade and the repetitive office pattern, bat maybe you should try a sun coming from the left side to make it more dynamic... in addition with a mix between warm natural & cold artificial light (even if it's not physically correct)

But, those are already finals, no?

[pailhead]

I actually like the exterior a LOT, th eonly thing that i'd remove are the bushes in the foreground, maybe you should replace those with photo cutouts.

I like the interior one as well, but that one is simply perfect. Has this been done with LWF?

Are all of the offices inside the same?

What sort of grass is this? I sense a little bit of a displacement effect but then again i also see some really fine detail in it. Mind letting us take a peak into your maps?

[Candelero]

Well done, really nice.
Make a fake DOF on the Interior one - on the fence (railing). Might come nice. just an idea.

Best regards,
nikki Candelero

[mcvltd]

The interior one looks fantastic! Really warm.

I think for the exterior, the bushes in the foreground just need some textures and maybe the seats are a little too prominent.

None the less, a great job.

Rob.

[DaForce]

very very nice, interior render is great!!

Yeah im curious about the grass outside as well...

[tomer]

Beautiful , I would consider to put some modern curtains in random array on the window in the exterior cam, and maybe replacing the photos on the walls in the 3 left room for the interior cam.

but its look great as is.

good job.

[greg04]

I think this is exellent.
It looks like you lost some cladding lines on the facade, at the end of the perspective, but this might be due to low render settings.
And, yes. I would loose those 3ds plants, or just add more variations to the leaves.

[greg04]

one more thing about exterior.
Try introducing some colour to the interior walls, fixtures, furniture etc., it seems like everything is grey in those offices.

[Helge]

Thanks for all comments

Pixelab: Both interior and exterior are original low settings, just for a PowerPoint presentation at the moment, I think
For the interior I just did a test with high settings

pailhead: Not done with LWF! And most of the offices are the same. Grass is done with displacement and a Composite material (I'll post the maps soon)

[Helge]

Grass Composite Material
Base mat


Mat 1


Mat 2


And how the fabric looks today

[adamf13]

Grass looks great.

Some problems with your exterior reflections though. The one on the front looks like it's at the wrong angle (seeing too much ground) and the horizon isn't at the same height as the one on the side (the horizon should line up as long as it's flat). But, I know how this goes.... it's always so hard to get the right photo for a reflection. Though, you might be able to stretch that tall one down in photoshop to atleast make it less apparent.... if your boss let's you.