Perham Liquor

[PixelJockey]

Yeah. The revised image is much better. Just softer and more inviting. Can you tone down the parking stripes. The uber-yellow is a bit distracting. They're too vibrant compared to the other colors in the image.

[glorybound]

Update

Wet pavement, yes or no? I am still not getting that wow. What would you suggest?

[DaForce]

For me, wet pavement.. yes.. looks great. But the sky doesnt "quite" match up anymore tho.

Cars are looking abit better now, however their tyres are still looking wrong.. way to gray.. they should be almost black. Fix that and it might finish everything off.

And possible another quick tweak in PS

[powerandrubber]

That's looking really nice. I like the puddles. Just tone down the cars and you're there.

[dominiquelaksmana]

hmm. dillema here. instantly my mind told me that the sky is not quite match with the "wet scene" because it's bright, then again, usually after raining, the sky will be bright. hmm.

how about burn it with a sun a tad? usually it's like that here in asia. sunlight after rain. and alittle bit rainbow, but can forget about the rainbow ofcourse.

and i agree about the cars that daforce is talking about. just darken those tyres in ps will do

anyway, i am very in to the water puddle. great idea....

[DaForce]

yeah i hit it with my s-curve in PS, and it looks more suiting. That changing the sky abit and the tyres and I think its good to deliver

[ene.xis]

also a that convertible on the foregrond doesn t match the wet floor!

[dominiquelaksmana]

well hey enexis, how come i didnt think of that?
my god. you have eyes of an eagle

[DaForce]

nicely spotted.. hahaha

[ene.xis]

nahhh....not my eyes for sure...my glasses r trained!

[dlparisi]

Yeah but it's obviously not raining now - no one has umbrellas (it looks as if it just rained). I like the wet pavement but the spots look a little too reflective and shiny, kind of like little mirrors strewn throughout the parking lot.

[ene.xis]

would u leave ur car top down?

[dlparisi]

would u leave ur car top down?

Maybe it's already filled with water!

[ene.xis]

u got a point!

[paulison]

your 'wet' image looks fantastic!

im wondering how you did this... texture map? or were the puddles actually modelled in

my only crit... the lighting on the cars isnt a perfect match for the scene but i guess if you have used RPC's, it can be an issue thats hard to fix. i think they need more contrast generally in the textures and shadows