Bar Interior

[voxel3d]

Hi guys, i'm working on this and don't know what else to do to add detail, i'm in need of a fresh set of eyes! I think it looks OK but still need something else... All comments welcome!



Voxel 3D

[percydaman]

could use some twinkle maybe. Also I can't make out whats happening directly over the bar. Maybe lighten that up some. Finally, I can see some red type of glow on the ceiling, but its confusing because I dont see what might be causing it.

[MoonDoggie]

The people look great? Tips?

[crazy homeless guy]

so, is the guy in the short sleeves hitting on the babe, and the other guy is getting up to whoop some butt because it is his girlfriend? ...nothin' like a good bar fight to make a scene.

[dlparisi]

Looks pretty cool to me "as is". Very nice "lounge" feel to it. Other than cleaning up some of the noise I'd say you're done except what's holding up the lights in te background? How did you get the bottles on the bar to glow? vray lightmtl?

[meanadam]

Bar stool looks out of scale, or too wide.

[aaron-cds]

The floor is the first thing I noticed. Try increasing the subdivisions for the glossy reflection. The guy looking into the camera should be rotated so he doesn't look so confrentational. Overall, the ambient light seems too bright for a bar. It needs more dark areas, more contrast. The lighting looks more like a restaurant than a bar. Very nice work on the details.

[voxel3d]

Thanks everyone for the comments! Still working, I'll post finished images later in the week...

Jorge

[priad]

You have the lighting IMO!
Ok subdiv to check and the scale!!!!
It could be a great image at the end

PS:I disagree with aaron-cds about the darck area

[paulison]

will look cool at a decent resolution i think. the glass screen on the left is a bit misleading though - it could use a frame?. Almost looks like a darker patch rendered on a 1.47 machine for a 1.5 job or something if u use distributed

[voxel3d]

Ah, the glass screen, it's supposed to have water falling on it's surface, I'm still working on that...

Jorge

[pailhead]

How did you do the glass screen, it looks pretty good!

[^Lele^]

You have the lighting IMO!
Ok subdiv to check and the scale!!!!
It could be a great image at the end

PS:I disagree with aaron-cds about the darck area

Listen to this man when he talks about bars...
Wouldn't know if he's a big frequenter, but his renditions are, well, stunning.

[priad]

You have the lighting IMO!
Ok subdiv to check and the scale!!!!
It could be a great image at the end

PS:I disagree with aaron-cds about the darck area

Listen to this man when he talks about bars...
Wouldn't know if he's a big frequenter

Are you sure you wouldn't? eheheh 10x my friend!

[greg04]

3D people look surprisingly good here, maybe because it is dark.
I agree with the previous posts, all this image needt is more definition, just up the settings, let it run for a couple of hours not just 1:22sec