Outdoor Sitting Room

[lsega]

Just finished this up for a client. Doesn't strike my eye as photo real but I was happy with the final result. C&C Welcome.

All the Best

Luis

[giraffe]

hi
I think this looks fine but maybe my eye- the shadows and shade areas look a little different.
I mean shadows are dark. but the facade of building that is in shade is not so dark.
maybe problem is that shader. but if u can fix that I think it can look more better.

[Jonferimonic]

The trees and reddish plants are way too saturated. The handrails would look better with some glossy reflections added. Cool little building though!

[SonOfNimrod]

the modelling and textures are great, i like the grass...

but yeah, colors are a bit too saturated and shading a bit flat......

[lsega]

Thanks all...

I get that alot about the shading being flat but I don't have a clue on how to correct it.

Luis

[glorybound]

Flat

The s-curve....

[Neilg]

Do you have reflections/gloss maps on any materials? looks like all your materials are pretty flat.

Could do with a more realistic wood texture too, thats a bit too uniform/bright & saturated.

[LarsSonparsson]

So here's version with little level correction.
Hope you don't mind. Now it's easy to see how
flat original is.



-LarsSon

[lsega]

Yeah, all the mats have a fresnel falloff map. I always set them darker because it seems I get abnormal reflections on surfaces that shouldn't have them (ie. highly reflective concrete -that sort of thing -looks horrible)

Luis

[DaForce]

Pretty good render over all.

But as the others said.. some of the plants are abit too saturated and have no color variation on the leaves which makes them seem fake.

[SonOfNimrod]

hmmm.... maybe have a bit of variation on the leaf materials.....that might reduce the flatness....