exterior wip - cc please!

[Rt3]

[glorybound]

Exterior Sky

I love the look and feel.... i am not sure everyone will agree, but very creative.

[Rt3]

thanks glorybound!
I decided to put it up because I am nearly done with it and it just felt odd. Cant really say why and at what point. The client wants that "night-time but unrealistically bright building"... I guess I'm just looking for suggestions.

[DaForce]

Looks pretty good.
Hard to say whats ot of place, given its an unrealistically lit image it kinda throws the whole thing around abit.

Maybe the trees are too lit up?
Are they purely lit up by the building lighs or do you have some other lights affecting them?

[olitech]

needs people.

[Rt3]

olitech: They are on the way....

Daforce: The is geometry being put in now for lights shinning up from the ground so there are some target lights illuminating the trees from below. I am now adjusting the facade to read little better it seems to have lost a bit of color.

at the end of the day the client loved the draft so go figure...

[add101]

superb image. what background did you use? vray sky?
i think the image works very well.
people would definitely add to it, and the pavement in the foreground looks very dark, which works graphically and compositionally to highlight the building and centre of the image, but with some people in it might be nice to have those areas brighter

niice

[Rt3]

add101: its a mix of vray sky and textures.

[paulison]

i like the image as well but maybe the problem is with the composition or because such a wide angle lense is used. Would be good to see what a difference people make - they are good to indicate scale

I think you may want to try and feel a bit closer to the building. If you have to sacrifice the large empty space on the left of the image then i think its worth it.

[pskdude]

?

are those little lights on the top left in post ?

[Kyle_Grace]

The lighting of the trees is especially good, are you going to do much work in post? I could see the imagine really taking off with 1/2days work.

[pailhead]

Very very nice! It lacks a bit of contrast IMHO. Love the trees, are they 3d?

[Rt3]

this project was cut a bit short so the last update is this. I also included the raw render and the wire for those wondering about what was done in post. Thanks for the feedback!

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