Building entrance - C and Cs please

[teabag]

Hello guys,
here is our current WIP of a building entrance, comments welcome


Cheers

Martin

[themaxxer]

hi, not bad, but I would desaturate it a little bit.

best regards
themaxxer

[voltron7]

pretty good, but a couple comments
1. Use camera correction or vertical shift
2. The small curved window in the upper left; the glass/mullions look strange, maybe to tiny?
3. Metal handrails need better material, they look sort of plastic.

I like the modeling otherwise and the rendering looks good.

[teabag]

thanks for the comments so far...here is first part of the building interior - an office

[tom182]

love the exterior, nice and rich in colour,

the tree could be better, it looks too blurry (you'd probably get away with it if it was closer to camera, ie out of focus) and I would get rid of the middle character.

what lighting setup did you use?

Tom

[teabag]

hello Tom,
just sunlight, vray cam, saved to 32bit EXR ..all the tweaks like exposure/gamma/saturation etc finalized in Photoshop....

were trying to use 3d tree now.

[teabag]

here r some other draft images for the purpose of crits and comments

[voltron7]

I really like the last one of those, nice!

[MHenry]

The Bottom exterior is very nice! I think that the perspective of some of your people (entourage) dosn't match the perspective of some your renders. Try using 3d people instead of putting them in durring post work. Great job on the lighting.

[DaForce]

Looks pretty nice. The slighly less saturated exterior shot looks alot better.
Nice work on the interiors.

I dont like the people tho.. but hey....

[jacksc02]

the people look too big in the lobby image.
Looks like they wont be able to fit in the entrance!

[sharpcube]

always put a litle shadow under people ther feet. Now just like ther flothing

[teabag]

hello guys, thanks for all the comments, the people in the cafe have not yet been finished, yep that guy on the right is out of perspective

The front view still needs to get populated, cars placed atc....were planning a night shot as well

youre right 3d people would look probably much better in some occasions but from a close up distance on a high res image they always seem to be too artificial ... do u suggest any nice 3d people package? have looked through axyz...any other company in the market?

images still need soem psing, tweaking etc...not final images we will keep them updated

thakx to all

Martin