Downtown Loft WIP

[jophus14]

Here is an image that I am working on for fun. It's a downtown loft created using Evermotion furniture. I'm trying to get a dusk feel to it with a sense of warmth. I have yet to add a background and the subtle touches such as drapes and kitchen decor. As of now I have a HDR image as the sky. Let me know what you think. What should I change or work on. I will post settings if need-be. I'd appreciate your comments. Thanks.

I don't know why the image is showing up so small. It's rendered out at 1700 X 1100 and photobucket won't display it any bigger then this.

[tehamnes]

Good work so far A bit cold expression at the moment. Add some warmth to your light sources...or/and if you use the vrayphysicalcamera, use a warmer white balance setting. Or simply in post use the color balance (Ctrl+B) in photoshop with a slight shift towards red and yellow.
I would maybe choose track-spotlights for the ceiling to make it more interesting, if you choose to show so much of it I mean.

[jophus14]

Hahah. Finally after almost 300 views someone responds. I didn't play around with it too much in PS yet because I still have some work to do on it, but I will adjust the Color Balnce in PS to see what I can get. I'm think about using a Physical Camera and re-rendering in hopes of creating a warmer feeling to the image. Thanks for the comments.

[pixelstudio]

you forground is to empty kinda distracting.

a couple of idea:
- i hope behind the glass is a garden, would give your images allot more detail.
- use a vraysun and let the sun hit the floor, so you will see some nice sunshine ove the floor
- you needs some other color then the darkones you are using. so pick a other colour and try experimenting with the walls, pillows.
- get some plants in your scene.

hmm well hope it help you,

[MHenry]

Good start. I agree with the others comments. The forground needs something. Maybe some kind of furniture configuration. The image is a bit dark as well IMO.

[jophus14]

Attached is the image that I started out with.

I might switch the colors around completely to brighten the scene up a bit. I had furniture towards the middle of the room in front of the camera but I found it distracting. Maybe it was the arrangement of the furniture. I was thinking of having this loft be on the 60th floor of a residential tower so all you would see is the city below outside the window but now I'm leaning more towards seeing some lawn and maybe a pool out the window panes. I appreciate your comments. Please keep them coming.

[Da_elf]

if you go with the sunset then you should ballance the exterior lighting with interior lighting. your scene definately needs alot more furniture unless your trying to sell a semi furnished appartment hehe then your bang on

[jodestroy]

a little comments.

to add realist in a scne. ( i think) we add a lot more details in the windows frame, Add, some switch and plug. You should have a baseboard ( usually 4 inches or less in a loft. Put some Chaos on the chiar. They are too align. In real life nothing is align.

nice job with the sun