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[dominiquelaksmana]

it has been around six months since i posted my last work..
so here it comes... hope you like it, c&c are most welcome

[arquiplay]

nice image... but

I found the bottom part of the image to be a little distracting, seems you overlapped a semi-transparent layer on top of the base wall... don´t know why???
And the same goes for some trees that seems overlapped by parts of the building.
Apart from that i like the lighting and composition, althought i would open the frame a little to the right and let the building to be seen a litle more.

Cheers

[dellis]

I like it. It seems t o have some blue colour cast going on though.

[ene.xis]

hi dominique!
long time

it s pretty nice i d color correct it a little and check that cars scale...something is not right there imo...either the car, the sidewalk curb or those people s scale is messing up with scale a little!
I d definetely lose the driverless car

[percydaman]

hey not bad. your grass looks too light though, especially in the shadows.

[visumporec]

Welcome back !
I would add a little green on the grass.
What's the problem with semi-transparent base wall, it looks strange...
Keep posting!

[dominiquelaksmana]

AH. NICE TO HAVE FEEDBACKs. THANKS FRIENDS....
that transparent wall... requested by client.
that tree looks like overlapping with the building, actually that's a mirror finish on the building
for the scale, hmmm. i checked and rechecked, it's to scale... anyway.. fix it later. cheers!!

[DrJan]

Those are some damn nice trees...
Where did you get them?

[Neilg]

that tree looks like overlapping with the building, actually that's a mirror finish on the building

Are you looking at the one on the left or the center?
You cant act like you want feedback and then dismess everything with 'its not my decision'

[MHenry]

Hi Dominique,

Long time no see. Welcome back! Your rendering looks very nice. As mentioned above the transparent wall is a little distracting.

[dominiquelaksmana]

my apologies cubiclegangster, i took back those words "what client wants".
those trees are from onyx.

have a nice day.
thanks everyon3!!!

[DaForce]

Looks pretty good mate.

I do think its abit blue tho.

Good to see some different renders from you!!