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Here are my crits that could help you further.
I really like the space and I think your renders are very good!
This could be personal (or my monitor) but I find the renders too dark, take a look at their histogram in ps. The peak is all the way to the left.
The RGB values of the white wall are in the 150-180 ballpark, i like them to be in the 200-230 ballpark. Because of that, the box seems a bit dull to me.
To show you what I mean, i had a go at it in ps. Sorry for the compression artefacts..
Other things I noticed:
- the stone wall at the left side of the third render is a bit too sharp
- your wooden beams could use some sort of highlight at the edges to more define their shape.
- i second jacksc02 on the tiling of the carpet.
I really like the space and I think your renders are very good!
This could be personal (or my monitor) but I find the renders too dark, take a look at their histogram in ps. The peak is all the way to the left.
The RGB values of the white wall are in the 150-180 ballpark, i like them to be in the 200-230 ballpark. Because of that, the box seems a bit dull to me.
To show you what I mean, i had a go at it in ps. Sorry for the compression artefacts..
Other things I noticed:
- the stone wall at the left side of the third render is a bit too sharp
- your wooden beams could use some sort of highlight at the edges to more define their shape.
- i second jacksc02 on the tiling of the carpet.
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