Parkside Development in Budapest, Hungary

[bakbek]

A General view of the site from within the park (Trees were virtually cut down to make a clean line of view)



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[peakyfreak80]

Looking pretty good there. One critique is that the sun is hitting the building on the left, but the clouds on the right. I think if you flip the sky it will read better. That grass up front looks great!

peakyfreak

[Jonferimonic]

Looks good, agree with the sun/sky comment and also the reflections on the balcony glazing seem off, they are the same on both sides of the building, wouldnt they be darker on the side facing away form the sun?

[Neilg]

The clouds stood out a bit to me, but other than that it's fantastic.

[powerandrubber]

Really nice! Love the grass level viewpoint.

[bakbek]

Looking pretty good there. One critique is that the sun is hitting the building on the left, but the clouds on the right. I think if you flip the sky it will read better. That grass up front looks great!

peakyfreak

yep... a fix of the background here. thanks for the comments.

[glorybound]

park

Nice! the foliage in the foreground stands out to me. You can tell it was done in post. other then that great image!

[VikrantBatra]

RedBug

Hey there,

I think the composition looks great. Only suggestion would be add a little bit of noise/dirt to the building color, at the moment it is a flat color. The flora is beautiful.

Thanks
Vik.

[thablanch]

nice composition, love the grass

[pailhead]

Bakbek,

do you have any training or experience with classical photography? Your illustrations are always nicely composed, and i remember seeing once how you outline a draft, and sketch certain elements for the final composition.
I'm curious to know if its something you picked up along the way while doing arch viz, or did you jump into this with some previous experience (photography, painting...)?


The only thing that bothers me here is the grass in the foreground. It is kinda crude, i would perhaps crop the image a bit, like a 1/10 horizontal stripe to remove the grass, but that would take away from the nice frame ratio. Have you considered adding some eye-level lawn photos instead of this?

[bakbek]

Bakbek,

do you have any training or experience with classical photography? Your illustrations are always nicely composed, and i remember seeing once how you outline a draft, and sketch certain elements for the final composition.
I'm curious to know if its something you picked up along the way while doing arch viz, or did you jump into this with some previous experience (photography, painting...)?


The only thing that bothers me here is the grass in the foreground. It is kinda crude, i would perhaps crop the image a bit, like a 1/10 horizontal stripe to remove the grass, but that would take away from the nice frame ratio. Have you considered adding some eye-level lawn photos instead of this?

I do have some experience with photography and painting. arch viz is something i got into more seriously after starting architecture studies - now a full time job.

I try to keep my camera handy all the time so that i can photos of scenes that might help as reference or resource - so i do have many grass photos to try to comp into the image, but this time i just figured that the blurring of the field depth can help ease up that crude grass. I've set up 2 plans for it and changed the mapping for the displacement so that near will look ok and far will look ok too.

Trying to set up a pipeline for animation, i tend to try to do all things within a render rather then post this days... so thats also why i'm not using comp images.

Thanks for your comments

[birdman67]

nice composition, love the grass

Yes! I can almost smell that grass

[werticus]

really nice image

[simon123]

i think the birds are flying in the wrong direction..?


nice image!

building looks a bit sketchupppy.