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  • New Exteriors_Aparts On The Beach

    Hello
    I havent posted for long time.
    Here are some of my works.

    I would be happy to hear your comments and crits to improve my works in future.
    Thanks to all.










    Last edited by giraffe; 26-05-2008, 02:30 AM.

  • #2
    WAw Nice job, I like your Jobs Giraffe!
    What do you use for trees and shubs?
    Zahir3d
    PIXARCHI.COM

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    • #3
      Great work Giraffe, as always !
      Natty
      http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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      • #4
        Love the natural colors, and those little details! Sorta my favorite style. Only crit is the skyline on the long facade view, the "glow" around the trees is a bit distracting.

        Best regards,
        A.
        credit for avatar goes here

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        • #5
          Very nice work! I like the water in the third one a lot.

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          • #6
            Bravo!

            My only crit and it's really a small point and perhaps not even correct, is that the palm tree in the background on the first image, appears to be a photoshop job, and as such isn't reflected in the water? I could be wrong!

            I especially like the water in the first one - is very convincing. Could you perhaps share some of your settings that you used for it?

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            • #7
              Looks great!

              Dirty beach though.

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              • #8
                hey hi nice renders i like the dirty sand, yup the twin palm tree looks a bit odd maybe just because of the texture but i love the pool water realism, overall good work

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                • #9
                  Awesome work !!! The textures are really stunning. The pool is one of the best I've ever seen...
                  Philippe Steels
                  Pixelab - Blog - Flickr

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                  • #10
                    congrats that is VERY VERY GOOD!

                    As others said just fix the non-existing tree reflections in the pool and fix the "large tiling" the small tiles in the pool are making and you'll be 100%
                    you're now on 98% but anything above 90% is excellent
                    Kind Regards,
                    Morne

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                    • #11
                      Great work, as always Giraffe

                      You need to clean up horizon near the palm on the "terrace" image. On the same image I couldn't work out what is the white thing on the walls of the background buildings?

                      keep'm comming

                      Zoran

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                      • #12
                        They're really good, pool is awesome.

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                        • #13
                          Hi friends
                          Thanks a lot for your comments and crits.
                          You are right about palm trees and reflections. Well I am learning and getting used to post- work kind of new and really I dont know what I am really doing and missing out much things.

                          There are some shells on the beach- it is not dirt. ehehehe

                          Thanks again so much I learned a lot from all of u always on this forum.

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                          • #14
                            Great job Giraffe! Such nice inviting images. I like the frosted glass at the balconies, too. Vegetation is also super!

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                            • #15
                              Here are some wires :




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