wips

[simon123]

Hi all.

These are sparetime images will continue adding changing etc in my lunch hour, would love you comments etc.
ta very much.

si.

[Morne]

for wip it looks not bad, its just that I think that you should not use such a wide anlge lense for the bathroom and in 2nd image is that table huge or is it a very small couch?

[DrJan]

I would also raise the viewpoint in the first image. The doorhandle is above your camera which looks weird.

[add101]

nice. nice lighting and materials.
the curtain blowing in the wind is a nice touch. are you going to add chairs to table?

[Timmeh]

Hi, great wip!

I would possibly remove a little of the bump/displacement you have on the tiles in the bathroom. I also agree with DVP3D's comment regarding the wide angle of the lens.

I would also possibly not have the curtain blowing as much as you have shown, I would be worried about the vase on the table being knocked off! (that was my initial thought!) :P

Other than that, great start!