Small condo interior

[Kr0no]

Hi all, one of my latest small interior, always a challenge for me those small spaces, use to work more on exterior and more and more im doing interior, tell me what you think, c&c most welcome!

Have a good 1!

[werticus]

over all good really.

just that in general they are all quite dark.

[Kr0no]

Thanks werticus, you found the image dark? maybe difference in monitor!? a little maybe.( iknow i have to recalibrate here) The condo only have windows in the front, dark floor, dark furniture small space, found that hard to illuminate and show the overall place, but im trying to get better in my work everyday. I visit this forum everyday since over 2 years learning from all you pro showing amazing work, dont be shy to write your comment im here to learn!

[Tommy L]

Some out of focus, I think DOF has been a little mis-used. If DOF doesnt add to a shot, it takes away. I see nice.ies making anoither cameo....
I like the modeling and the use of camera angles is suitable for the space.

[Tommy L]

Some out of focus, I think DOF has been a little mis-used. If DOF doesnt add to a shot, it takes away. I see nice.ies making anoither cameo....
I like the modeling and the use of camera angles is suitable for the space.

[Kr0no]

Thanks Tommy but there s no DOF in thoses images. Lots of client they dont really like that kind of photoreallism, they want to see all.

P.s. maybe its time for your new pair of glasses!

[werticus]

I'm thinking from a photography POV they are too dark, they look real for sure, if you were a bad photographer :P

[Kr0no]

Heu..ok i was going to say something here that i remove, by respect...nice critic thank you very much. I was looking for constructive critics and comments,....

http://www.chaosgroup.com/forums/vbu...ad.php?t=39083

Lets talk photoreallism......

Shall we!?

[paulison]

To learn you need to be able to take criticism. notice nobody else has commented?

I had a few suggestions but think you may take it the wrong way so i wont bother. You posted a thread of an image done by werticus over a year ago.....

Your images are good but there is room for improvement, but unless you accept suggestions then people arnt going to TRY and help.

[DrJan]

I would swear that I posted a reply to this topic... but I guess something went wrong or I forgot to press "Post Reply".

Anyway, I think the images look good overall, but everything is a bit cluttered. Especially in the sitting area. There's not enough room to walk between the couches.
I would've removed the couch that's aligned with the TV, or replaced it with a single, smaller chair.
And you seem to have some light leaks near the front door.

[Kr0no]

Hi, sorry if you got me wrong, i can take criticism its just you need argument to go with it, :they look real for sure, if you were a bad photographer ....ok i can take it no problem, its just that its like saying your image are good if you have bad eyes! Mmmm allright its all good, what i can do now from a technical pov, GI, Lighting, physical camera, camera placement....Did nt mean to be rough or offend anyoone, sorry about that werticus....

[Kr0no]

Thx for your coment DrJan, Furniture placement is from the client, i think it is too clustered too, saw the light leek too, what do you do in those situation? i could use some kind of geometry to block outside the door. Did you find my images too dark too? If its a general opinion i would really have to check my monitor. Its a small scene and its going to be interactive walkthrough, i ll post the link when it will be up on the server.

[pvanhaitsma]

Lighting looks really nice. Also the light fixtures and appliances are great. Couple little things that caught my attention:
Oone of the pillows is cutting through another and in that same shot it seems like from that camera angle you should see some ground.(unless maybe its in a high rise)
Once again, the shots are looking good.

I just noticed the bathroom shot, thats a dangerous angle to be taking a picture from with a full tub of water. I can just see someone holding a camera above their head. Ha.

[DrJan]

Thx for your coment DrJan, Furniture placement is from the client, i think it is too clustered too, saw the light leek too, what do you do in those situation? i could use some kind of geometry to block outside the door. Did you find my images too dark too? If its a general opinion i would really have to check my monitor. Its a small scene and its going to be interactive walkthrough, i ll post the link when it will be up on the server.

I hope your client isn't a professional interior decorator :P

You should check if there are intersecting faces, or maybe your doorframe is sticking through another object.

I can't say anything about your images being too dark. The monitor I'm viewing them on sucks monkey balls...