interiors

[jamesf73]

hello

some interior renders of a duplex that i've been working on for a while. feedback welcome.










many thanks

james

[Joost Ink]

It's nice. nice space too.
i think the gaps between the floor planks are a bit too wide. I would loose my keys between it.

[MHenry]

Very nice work. I think the exterior background images should be a little more blown out to match the sceen.

[jamesf73]

Very nice work. I think the exterior background images should be a little more blown out to match the sceen.

i know what you mean, but they're actually rendered in the scene

[olly]

The staircase image is incredible.

How long have you been using vray?

[rmejia]

Very nice work! Nice lighting and materials.

The dark sky in the second image is the only thing that looks a little odd to me, feels like it should be a little brighter.

[jamesf73]

Very nice work! Nice lighting and materials.

The dark sky in the second image is the only thing that looks a little odd to me, feels like it should be a little brighter.

thanks a lot. yeah it is a little dark there. i think it'd help if you could see a bit further up.
j

[digitalx3d]

Perhaps adding some imperfections to the glass windows would help. Some of the other guys are commenting on the lighting that occurs outside, but I don't think that's too far off really. If anything the lighting outside could be a bit more contrasty.

But what's missing is some depth between the windows and what's beyond outside. Perhaps some reflections on the inside of the glass and maybe adding some kind of dirt maps to the glass. These buildings look like they could be very old, and in that case the window glass might be bowed or mottled and might have areas where the clarity is less than perfect.

Otherwise, I think these images are looking great. The light levels inside are fantastic, and the dawn sunlight always creates an interesting mood.

Nice work!

[stevesideas]

It's nice. nice space too.
i think the gaps between the floor planks are a bit too wide. I would loose my keys between it.

I suggest buying a fat keyring so this does not happen !

Great images..

[jamesf73]

I suggest buying a fat keyring so this does not happen !

Great images..

the property is actually in London where everybody tends to leave their doors unlocked because everyone's so honest. so you see it wouldn't really matter if you lost your keys.

i know the floorboards are a little too gappy, but i like the map and can't find a suitable one to replace it

[jamesf73]

Perhaps adding some imperfections to the glass windows would help. Some of the other guys are commenting on the lighting that occurs outside, but I don't think that's too far off really. If anything the lighting outside could be a bit more contrasty.

But what's missing is some depth between the windows and what's beyond outside. Perhaps some reflections on the inside of the glass and maybe adding some kind of dirt maps to the glass. These buildings look like they could be very old, and in that case the window glass might be bowed or mottled and might have areas where the clarity is less than perfect.

Otherwise, I think these images are looking great. The light levels inside are fantastic, and the dawn sunlight always creates an interesting mood.

Nice work!

thanks, John

i've actually got some noise on the downstairs windows - i guess it might be worth bumping it up. i like the idea of adding some dirt to the edges too. i think i'll probably leave it off the upstairs windows as that part is new build as opposed to the existing downstairs windows which are the original victorian ones.

j