Classroom

[olly]

Been working on this image today and thought I'd post it here to get a bit of industry feedback.



Don't hold back...

Cheers,
Olly

[MikeeMax]

this image is very nice. the ceiling wood seems a bit too different from the walls for my taste.
and the outside sky image looks a tiny bit overexposed compared to the lighting inside the room.
again it is a very very clean image for me.
congrats

but you stole it from the vray forum .

[olly]

but you stole it from the vray forum .

Gotta look after your work...

BTW, thanks for the nice comments.

Cheers,
Olly

[jamesf73]

superb image. don't like the white square on the wall though

[sv]

awesome...

[olly]

Here's an update:



Let me know if it's gone in the right direction...

Cheers,
Olly

[elivnA]

Here's an update:



Let me know if it's gone in the right direction...

Cheers,
Olly

There's too much wood i'd say. Get some nice stone on the floor or something

[Da_elf]

so if a kid goes missing the cliff is the 1st place they look?

[olly]

There's too much wood i'd say. Get some nice stone on the floor or something

I might give it a go when I get a minute, but the wood is as spec'd.

so if a kid goes missing the cliff is the 1st place they look?

Something like that.

[peakyfreak80]

Talk about a distracting view. There's no way I could stay focused on learning in a room like that!

As the image goes, I agree about the plethora of wood. Walls and ceiling look nice, but maybe something different for the floor. Also, with something so simple, you might want to add more detail where you can, like around the windows or on the concrete outside.

peakyfreak

[PIXELBOX_SRO]

nice one really!!!! congrats

kinda wondering about your lighting....is it HDRI in the environment and some area light in the window???...curious as the visible shadows r strangely angled if it was a direct light...

[voltron7]

Looks great Olly. My only comments to add, are that the door hinges look very tiny and the wall that the window is in looks quite thin. Materials and lighting look really nice and warm.

[MHenry]

Nice clean render.

[olly]

My only comments to add, are that the door hinges look very tiny and the wall that the window is in looks quite thin.

I'm pretty sure the wall and hinges are the correct size, but will look into it...

kinda wondering about your lighting....

It's just a light blue in the env colour slot...

Cheers,
Olly

[thablanch]

Nice exterior / interior balance...