Vision in Concrete

[olly]

Here's something else I've been working on that needs a bit of feedback:



Let me know how it comes across...

Cheers,
Olly

[zeronove]

looks cool!

IMHO it's just a bit too crisp and I would remove some blue/cyan in color correction

[olly]

looks cool!

IMHO it's just a bit too crisp and I would remove some blue/cyan in color correction

Thanks for the comments. I added the cyan tinge, so it looks like it wasn't successful?

Cheers,
Olly

[PIXELBOX_SRO]

i like it Olly, kepp the blue tinge

[percydaman]

looks nice so far. Are you using any bump on the concrete? It looks too smooth for my taste. A specular map might help too.

[stevesideas]

I like it. I like the cyan hue also. Could do with something more interesting going on though...not sure what exactly.. Some kind of water feature comes to mind..

Using Arroway textures ?

[olly]

Good spot.

I'm trying to produce an image to be more about light and form, but maybe that isn't working either?

Cheers,
Olly

[stevesideas]

For me, it just feels like a space rather than any kind of form.
I would definately try and create some kind of feature or incorporate an item of focus..maybe against the left wall. Maybe my interpretation for form is off, who knows. Maybe add some spots that are visible and create some interesting volume effects. I still like the idea of a water feature...caustics would look cool in a room like this. Just ideas coming to mind..at the end of the day feel free to ignore me

[judderman]

Turn it in to a crime scene, big pool of blood, black and yellow police tape, outline of a person, rubbish lying about

I think there should be more difference between the walls and the floor. Liking it though!

Hmm, I might make myself a crime scene actually. Something grim :P

[thomasfenger]

Great simplistic image. Love the hue and crisp detail. The only thing I would add would be a little bit of specular variation.

[pixela]

I like the cyan tint too
Image looks too much sharp in my monitor. I prefer less sharp.

[peterguthrie]

I like it, and the colour. Reminds me of some photos I took of Ando's museum in Fort Worth a few years ago: http://www.flickr.com/photos/pg/tags/ando/

How about being a bit more abstract in the composition, not trying to show so much? The wall to the left doesn't do much for me. I've cropped my fav bit in the attachment below, then the clock has more importance and the opening to the left is only represented by the light on the floor.

[simmsimaging]

I like the image and the colour as well. I think PG's crop is a nice 'single page' version, but I think the wide crop works nicely as well. Good sense of space in that one.

Nice work.
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[olly]

Thanks for the all the comments/suggestions.

I do like the crop Peter, but agree with simmsimaging on the sense of space for the wide shot...

Thanks again,
Olly

[nils_p]

Very nice. I especially like the colors