Dull Building Part2

[Da_elf]

Hehehe this is my version of a dull building. basically a hunk of concrete. nothing special. before i get blasted i already know i forgot the caustics, and also i know the grass is ugle. i hate birds eye shots. been a while since i posted and this is what i go and post lol

http://www.elfpro3d.com/Clients/Warehouse/Bigb.jpg
http://www.elfpro3d.com/Clients/Warehouse/Bigc.jpg

[percydaman]

your right thats pretty dull. I'd say the scale of your 'concrete' texture is too large.

[ISurg]

Not much to comment here. You can probably see all the bugs and unfinished pieces yourself.
I bet this was one of thoose "Ok, we can pay you only (insert a small amount here), but we need this done in a few hours" jobs.

[Da_elf]

yeah. it was pay you next to none, need it to look brilliant and will give you next to no details. i had to fight to keep enough interest in the project to get it finished.

[rmejia]

Hmmm, how about painting the entire building bright orange.

[jujubee]

People, more plants, and possibly some clouds in the sky. Does the building also have HVAC units on the roof?

[Da_elf]

beats me, the client wasnt an architect or engineer and gave me the files he had which didnt include any plans for what was on the roof

[paulison]

no doors or openings in this slab of concrete?.

I think the camera view is good but it does make the roof the primary focus. you would expect to see a parapet wall around the edges and some kind of low pitched roof behind with box gutters etc

i like the trees in the background.

you may have to improvise regarding details on the building to show what it could look like!

[yyk]

No offense but an image of a dull building should not necessarily mean a dull image. This struck me as odd with the first "dull building" post and with this too.. you're the professional paid to make nice visuals and there are tons of decent looking images of boxes like this around

As said, more ppl, greenery and some texture work would make this far less a dull picture.. also maybe if you had the chance to move the cameras bit farther away? my 2 cents.. but there is of course the question of budget.

[Da_elf]

the angles were chosen by the clients. dont know what influenced him to want those angles. yeah, there are doors. the client didnt want the building to look pretty. its supposed to look like a big tough hunk of concrete to inspire security for the kinds of things placed in there