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    Hello , this is a past work that I made for a client, critiscs welcome.

    Onz
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  • #2
    Pretty good...I would raise a camera a bit so you don't get that pointy angle at the top, unless you really wanted it.

    And that "ivy" plant on the wall, I would make the texture less saturated - green, more to dark and desaturated green, it stands out too much and it takes away the realism.
    www.hrvojedesign.com

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    • #3
      I like the front 'glass' panel, well done.
      (and I personally do not like the sky image)
      Alain Blanchette
      www.pixistudio.com

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      • #4
        Nice work. I like the camera angle and the glass looks sweet. I think your render is a little to clean and could use a little VRay dirt or some AO. The plant life looks a little to CG IMO (I like the placement of the vegitation but think you should work on the materials a little bit).
        Mike Henry
        http://mhenry.cgsociety.org/gallery/

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        • #5
          thx a lot!! i will try to fix that thing an repost!!

          Thx again!

          onz

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