Villa & Pool

[olly]

Just working on this job and wanted to get some feedback & suggestions.

**EDIT: Updated images have been added later in the thread.**


Let me know what you think or what you'd change...

Cheers,
Olly

[add101]

Nice, looks fun.
I like the saturated colours and bright mood.

[3DMK]

The camera correction seems a bit too strong, especially in the first image.

Maybe some tree shadows to create a bit more contrast in the lighting.

Other than that...nice work!

[rmejia]

Looks great, only thing that bugs me a little is the camera lens distortion in the first pic.

[zeronove]

my suggestions are:

- a more interesting background, maybe some clouds (not too many)
- some interior lights
- maybe some floating objects on the water
- in general all the walls are too clean, its textures are too flat and edges too crisp

about the camera correction I usually try with auto then I go back a few steps

hope it helps


hey, just noticed your funny watermark

[olly]

Thanks for the feedback.

I'll try a few out and post an update when the job's all done...

Cheers,
Olly

[Jacob Hutson]

dirt

add a vray dirt pass to it, mix some noise into the layer. That will help to dirty things up a bit.

as other people have mentioned
some lights (not necessarily on) and i think a few sparse clouds will really help
you horizon gets darker as well. personally i think it should be lighter.
maybe back the saturation of sky off a bit to help the buildings pop a little
and the perspective fix is too ull on.

cheers

[olly]

Here's some updates, hopefully getting close to being final:




C&C's welcome...

Cheers,
Olly