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  • Another kitchen

    For some known brand.

    We said, it looks okay, for a 8sec shot, presenting three "boxes" (fridge, oven etc...) and a gas cooker hob.

    What's ur thoughts ?
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    I just can't seem to trust myself
    So what chance does that leave, for anyone else?
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  • #2
    I think it lacks atmosphere. To me it needs some more contrast in the scene...maybe a brighter light source from the left as if a light is coming into the kitchen.. Clean modelling....
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    Steve

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    • #3
      Sure. It straight from render. But you know all these aniso surfaces... where it comes to brightness it become very bright, so you don't see aniso beauty (sure we add this in post).
      I just can't seem to trust myself
      So what chance does that leave, for anyone else?
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      • #4
        Im not sure I would just leave it to post...I would personally add a light to the scene rather than relying on just post work..Also, if you are using VFB you should be able to adjust the exposure and still see the antistropic effects...
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        Steve

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        • #5
          Some product closeup...
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          So what chance does that leave, for anyone else?
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          • #6
            Great quality render work. I can see how this will pop with some color grading.

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            • #7
              Thx.

              Agency made some... comments on previously approved work (as usually) and now it looks much much more lighter

              Rendering now... it's too bad, that there's nothin' u can do about overriding material reflection with f.e. a hdr image. Or excluding object from reflection for a material... Especially, when you have small renderfarm
              I just can't seem to trust myself
              So what chance does that leave, for anyone else?
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              CG Artist

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              • #8
                Done.

                http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFQWsgaRSDQ
                I just can't seem to trust myself
                So what chance does that leave, for anyone else?
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                CG Artist

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                • #9
                  cool...but the watermark is very distracting...looks like some render artefact.
                  Marc Lorenz
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                  • #10
                    Great image, my only comment would be to add some variation to the cabinet textures. To me they're all reading as one large wood map spanning across all the cabinets (in spite of the reveals between them). I might move the uvw maps a bit on each cabinet face to add some variation and 'random ness' a bit.

                    Otherwise nice work, great color, and excellent detail modeling.

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                    • #11
                      Thx

                      Texture is a mix between generated and real one. They are all different.
                      I just can't seem to trust myself
                      So what chance does that leave, for anyone else?
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                      CG Artist

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                      • #12
                        I guess what I meant was is that the grain patterns seem to match up even across the reveal gaps which wouldn't really happen in the real world I think* (vertically is probably fine, but horizontally seems weird)

                        but we're splitting hairs here it's a great image and just thought I'd share the one thing that jumped out to me that raised my 'this is a rendering and not real' flag

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