Church

[glorybound]

here is an image I did this weekend and I would appreciate any feedback to make it better.

[claude_tnt]

nice image GB.. it could be a little sunny tho...
it looks very "cold"
davis

[glorybound]

I agree. I plan on more trees and a better sky. The building is gray so that doesn't help

[Klonsemann]

One point at the geometry.
The two pillars of the first portal seems to fly.

[tct70]

Also I'd be tempted to loose the blue frames.

[glorybound]

Update II with better sky, tree line, and desaturated colors.

[Morne]

Hi Bobby

I like it a lot and it looks very, very good. Just one thing bothers me and that is the bushes in the foreground and to the right, they seem too green (oversaturated), Besides that it looks like a masterpiece. Was this for your company or a private job?

[glorybound]

Thanks. It was a side job.

Everything we do looks the same so it was nice to do something a little different.

[glorybound]

Some color correction for the "masterpiece"

[mmikee]

I love it. It has a nice feel to it.
Nice work !

Regards,
Mike

[Jonferimonic]

hey not been on the forum for ages so its been a while since ive seen any of your work but you have definately improved, i really like the two midground cars..they look spot on and nice subtle glow in the highlights. The building looks really good too, except for the roof which is flat as a pancake and stands out.
There is also a geometry artifact on the left hand tower thing? where the two faces meet. Someone else mentioned the greeney green bushes. The only other thing that stands out is the colour correcting, parts of the scene have a lot of red in such as the carpark, kerbs and facias yet the sky (on my monitor) is blue? Everything in the scene should take its hue from the sky.