swimming pool view

[horoXhoro]

hi guys.this is my current architecture walkthru/film (:P)project I working on. stil work in progress alot of details gonna put into.
Using vray1.5 3dsmax 2010
with a standard cam and 1 direct light.
environment is using Vraysky
post production in aftereffect
please comment on my visual I really wanna improve my skills and art sense.thank you and sorry for my english( I have bad english grammar(:P)

[PIXELBOX_SRO]

hmmmm very nice...makes me want to jump in the pool
nice shot composition too!
congrats

[horoXhoro]

thanks for comments pixelbox!

[3DMK]

Agree...really nice composition!

Things to improve

--Repeating wood decking texture.

Lighting is a bit too soft. Try more contrast in lighting & stronger reflections on materials

Blured Plant in RHS foreground is too distracting...I would loose it...unless it's hidding something

Also DOF is too strong for this type of Camera lens.

Hope this helps

[oligophant]

hi horoXhoro, my only complain it's that for an outside pool scene it should be the minimun amount of shadows proyected by near buildings. I Don't know if you desing it , but you can avoid this fact by best placing your sun light.

[horoXhoro]

3dmk: agree with you on lighting too soft. also the contrast. hard for me right now because my screen display not very accurate -__-.
for stronger reflections on material? i will give it a try
ya the DOF is kinda of disturbing haha..will remove it hehe..thanks!!

oligophant: sorry don't really get what u try to say im sorry ... try to explain in simple way? thanks!!

one stupid question here..usually how u guys model the pool water mesh? a single plane or a box with thickness???

later i will try to upload a new version thanks guys

[oligophant]

lol, my drawings skills are too bad, but i made an effort , i hope this could help you , its something my teacher at uni told me when i was doing an hotel complex

[horoXhoro]

I get u now nice drawing and good effort thanks buddy
I will try out a render no casting shadow over the pool cheers

[MHenry]

Very Nice Render! Love the composition.

[horoXhoro]

thanks henry. saw your works too very nice

currently just free to follow up this project..i will revisit with HDRI rendering soon..