Condo

[glorybound]

I gave it all I got!

[Kr0no]

Wow, really a nice improvement. I would lost the bloom effect mostly visible on the tip of the roof, and lens flare a bit more subtile,imo. Except for the garage up front on the street, you should have a really nice view from the other side? Wood log is really good, good work!

[glorybound]

Thanks. It wasn't easy making three garage doors look sexy! If I revisit it I will put mulch, or some other ground cover, under the bushes and work on the diffused glow and lens flare.

[dlparisi]

Much better. I'd lose the lens flare though. The roof shingle texture could use a little work now too.

[glorybound]

Lens flare gone.

[Jonferimonic]

To my eye its still not working compositionally, LarsSonparssons version was along the right lines. Too much sky + too much foreground - less of one would work better. And the sky/roof/walls/drive colours jumped off screen and punched me in the face. The walls bump/disp map is better than the original though.

[simmsimaging]

looks a lot better to me. A few tweaks could help, see attached for some thoughts - very rough though.

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