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    Hey guys! got a chance to do a small & very quick interior project. Have finished this with bespoke furniture last weekend. STill waiting to see client feedback.. Images are not rendered on very hi res & production quality yet as it is 1st draft. All images taking less thn 10 mints for this size. Comments and critics had always helped me in improving my renderings would love to hear from you guys. ciao!
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    Prateek Vishwa
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  • #2
    Hey, good start looks like your pretty much done with the modelling side.

    Your scene looks very dark though, which is difficult because a lot of the decor is also dark. Are you able to have the blinds open to get more light in? Also your materials need some more attention, the wood on the furniture looks slightly odd, a bit more like plastic.

    Could you put an image on the TV to add some interest? Might also make it look a tiny bit brighter lol

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    • #3
      Yes, your images are underexposed and I would also work on your camera angles. Camera 3 for example looks like the camera is just hanging below the ceiling which is an odd viewpoint to choose.

      Good start though, the images could look quite nice once you are done.
      Stefanie

      https://renderkitchen.com/

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      • #4
        the stone material needs more work, the texture is mirrored and it looks weird....blurry materials need more subdiv. they are grainy.
        if they are for stills i would use displacement for the stone and fur or displacement for rugs....the modelling part seems well done.

        Fernando
        show me the money!!

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        • #5
          I have to disagree with all the people above. What struck me was the dark richness of the images instead of the usual bland highly lit interiors everyone does. I like it. Maybe the fact that they don't look like what veryone expects is part of their appeal. They have a nice mood.
          mh

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          • #6
            Thanks to all! thank you Mikeh! Im uploading updated images based on above comments & client feedback, if client approve will upload final images soon. Ciao!
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            • #7
              the lighting looks great.

              you should really consider taking an extra 20 mins to pop that fireplace into 3 dimensions....or at least drop that fireplace map into a vraylightmtl and get some pop from it....

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