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[AwayZz_]

a bar for a restaurant of a friend

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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Hi !
the bottles looks too big, the glass looks too small, the lightning needs a little bit more white, a little bit less blue, color less saturated, especially for green seats. you can blur midmap the wood on ceiling a little. remove the girl maybe.
still a little bit of light splotches to get rid off.
maybe a sticker on each bottle ? some people blurred, 3d, withtransparency at the bar... motion movment of someone in front of the camera ?
more more yellow on the white light on top of the bar.

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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the lugs are floating on the ceiling ???

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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and the chairs also a little bit offsetted the ground right now.

[garrett_jsaa]

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It's a wine bar? That may explain the bottle/glass sizes JP.

I like it. My one nit-picky criticism is that font! Not a fan.

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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yep I know it's a wine bar, but the glasses looks like porto glasses. and the bottle is really like 1.14L more than a standars 750ml.

I'm just trying to help. and yes...the font. But for those kind of stuff I say notthing because surely it's given from the client.

Jp

[merlik585]

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ouch !!

But you are right

And to add my 2 cents,the person at the bar looks like a zombi

But overall this is a nice start,nothing that a little bit of work can't correct.

Renee

[garrett_jsaa]

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JP, sorry. You are entirely right on the bottle sizes. Just wasn't sure if we were all on the same page.

[AwayZz_]

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hello

ok 1 if it is of wines although estan a little great if I agree the problem were that I did them and dimencion the bottle will not try to areglar it the wood of the ceiling this floating does not arrive cables like a the mita that sostines of the ceiling po that happens is that they do not see ademas speaks with an engineer and said to me that they are podian to do asi jajaja if I remain rare the girl will clear it is is my first one to render that I do at night and with that type of iluminacion the one of the chairs floating I do not understand so that I have left asi estan just in the floor and the one of the yellow light not since to do it I do not have left very well if you send the file to setting you can help me to improve JP

thank srry my english it is of translator

[dieg]

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hola Reinaldo, mas alla de los detalles que mencionan los expertos a mi me gusta mucho la imagen que lograste. Muy buen trabajo!

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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No Soy un expertos, ma mi gusto de vere muy bueno imagen.

and Reynaldo, I absolutely didn't understood your babelfish translation. You can write in spanish if you don't know at all english. It still be easier.

Reynaldo non comprender babelfish translator, puedes escrivar nel espanol. Molto Muy Muy bueno.

Jp

[dieg]

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JP, today i?ve seen for long time some of your works and if you say you are not an expert its ok, but i think the level of your works is from that category... Saludos desde Argentina!!

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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Thank you!
it's not difficult with micha tutorials and a fast computer.
'til now, I just have access to one of those two.

[AwayZz_]

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Thank you!
it's not difficult with micha tutorials and a fast computer.
'til now, I just have access to one of those two.

que no eres un expertoooooo!!!! eres un ejemplo a segir tus renders son exelentes, bueno tendre que practicar mas esos tutoriales.

fast computer a que te refieres que necesito? me cambio la maquina? mi procesador actual es un AMD X2 4800+ a 2.4Ghz yo creo que resuelve, no hago animaciones

ahh y gracias dieg

[Jean-Paul Paloux_cg]

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ti computer esta muy bueno que mio. (PIV 3.4Ghz)