My render

[franter99]

Hi, this is my first render with vfr. This is a small depuration system that we assemble in our company. Many people maybe is not interesting in this work but any comment will be appreciated.
Excuse for bad English.

[demjan_cg]

Re: My render

I like it a lot, except few of details.

mash is too rough, you can see broken edges allover the object.
legs of a canister are too simple, so they look artificial. you should do some filet on edges, or something.
and the third thing I would change is material of pipes. i don't like those stripes.

oh, yes, and some DOF would look nice.

marko

[franter99]

Re: My render

Thank for comments, in fact some edges must be blended. The tank is not metal but fiberglass. The material of the pipes is plastic PVC. I hope that much people ,like you, can share the renderings of this type of objects and give some suggestions to improve it.