just posting my revisions

[santos]

any comments and suggestions will be appreciated... critiques are very welcome... thanks.

[nscheiter_cg]

Re: just posting my revisions

was this using the demo? or did you purchase the final plug in.

[santos]

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its only the evaluation of vray .. still a beginner

[santos]

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more renders

[santos]

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more

[nomeradona_cg]

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the improvement is very clear. i cat imagine the amount of time you have put in this project. from modelling to texture, from lighting to rendering. maybe you should sleep now.

good job bro.

[mikaztro]

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Holy cow!!! What a nice piece. Are you a Filipino?

[santos]

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yup Pure Pinoy...(pinoy ka din noh? si nomer pinoy din...) thanks for the comments

[nomeradona_cg]

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yes he is. and me too.

[santos]

which one do you think is better??? suggestions & comments will be appreciated

[mikaztro]

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yup Pure Pinoy...(pinoy ka din noh? si nomer pinoy din...) thanks for the comments

Wow! It's good to hear that many Filipinos excell in this kind of field. I'm a Filipino too. Excellent work JD. I want to learn as much as you do and perhaps we could hookup one day and share your expertise on this matter. I'm kinda new to this. My beloved Cad renderer went abroad so I was left with no re-course but to learn the hard way. Unless of course someone here accepts work for a not so high fee. ;D

[santos]

freelance work

[mikaztro]

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Jeff, you never seizes to amaze me. Excellent works pare! Le coubusier & Barcelona chairs are excellent choices for a minimalist setting. Do you accept freelance work? Where can I contact you?

By the way, as a practising Architect myself, here are my comments on the 3rd and 4th pic:
The modern orange chairs doesn't compliment the wood paneling on the bar. Neither do I think the wooden bar compliments the whole modern character of your design unless you change the contour and design aesthetics of it. At any rate, the whole render are generally good.

Kudos sir!

Mike

[dcauldwell_cg]

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Santos
I admire the your renders, there is a lot of work going in them and I think the natural look of the daylight, soft shadows etc is great.
The floor is interesting, and I'm not quite sure how you have got the patterns in there?
I think it could be improved however if you could get some texture into it with a bump map to give some definition to the joints in the floor, and also maybe a less reflective finish on the Mies chairs.
Look at these http://www.vrayelite.com/Gallery/gallery_aaron_coon.htm

Great renders, keep them coming.

David

[santos]

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thanks for the comments . still studying this plugin. about the design( its a freelance work their design and concept i just render it) i also agree with your comments the chair and the wooden bar doesnt match the feeling in the interior.... thanks to the link also nice one