Mp3

[arturmf]

Please,
be free to coment my image
Thanks

[Paraglobal]

Re: Mp3

Very nice

In the red part seems to have some strange bump, is that on purpose or because low quality settings?

Congratulations

Bye
Sergio Silva

[mikaztro]

Re: Mp3

Wow! Awesome rendering. I wish I can do that too... :'(

[arturmf]

Re: Mp3

Hy Guys, thanks for your comentaries
Paraglobal, i think the bump efect is due to quality of image, because i didn´t use any bump map on the material.
Salutation
Artur

[dalomar_cg]

Re: Mp3

Great render...In my opinion it needs to be reframed a bit and the DOF tweeked as well. I thing you'd want to reframe the image getting the mp3 players completely within the shot. Showing 3 of them, yet cutting of the top seems a little odd. For a detail shot maybe a little closer in on what you want to show and maybe have it be of only one player (maybe one in the background). As far as the DOF, I think it should be centered on the middle player because it puts too much in the foreground and it causes the first player to be far too blurry in my opinion. You'd want it to be blurry enough to get the effect, but not so much that you can't make out some of the details. I made a script that will help you preview the DOF which you can find here. That may help you adjust things. There are also a few other scripts floating around that will help with setting the focal distance and finding the right aperture size (check Micha's Tools page for that). Other then those two things, I think its great. Materials, model, environment are all working well.

[arturmf]

Re: Mp3

Thank you very much Dalomar for your answer!
So, i tried to put the middle mp3 on focus, but i dont know exactly why the last mp3 stay focused. I think the script will help. I´ll try to make others images with the entire mp3(s) and then i upload here!
Best regards
Artur