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i am a new member and i'm still bad about vray, but i'm researching stage.i want to receive comments from all of you alot.thank very much.every comments will help me progress.thanks
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Hi luuanh..(etc..)
First thing: WELCOME ;D
Not so bad at all, for being your first shots!!! My compliments!
But you've chosen such a difficult subject to start with: even a pro would have a lot of work to do with the number of complex material i see here!! My opinion is that you try setting mats in much simpler scenes, if you want to improve and not to lose many many time.
In your work here i see a very interesting green material: i don't give if it's plastic or plaster, it's nice, to me..
A fine work is done with the white bricks: i love them! Maybe they're a little too reflective, i would turn this down a bit..
I must say i don't love your chairs too much: perhaps the models are a little low poly for the accuracy of the scene: try looking for better pieces of furniture, if you can..
Water is a little weird: i think a simple TGS with a smart bump will do the trick
Last but not least, the plants are SU weak points (sigh..): i'm trying to make them real myself (it's such an hard task..).
Hope my critics will help you a little on your way to reality!
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what GI engine did you use?Comment
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I love these
The images breath a pleasant athmposphere.
The bamboo plant needs a bit more tweaking in my opinion.
Superb first posting!Comment
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hope to see another renders. bravo :
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thank for 4 comment to me!
dear pibuz!! hi wellcome! the first i want to thank you alot about high valuable advice you give to me.i loves them!! i knows that i still have alot of mistakes. anhd your critics help me check return and feel try a lot to progress.thanks! the world is very huge, and learning is too.every advice will help me grow up.i needs them!
last thank you!!!!
dear nomeradona!! hi, do u recognize me!! thank!
the Gi i uses
first 1.3 iran..map
secornd 0.7 LC
at here i only used vray sun!
dear biebel!! thank a lot! i 'm trying my best.i indulges a lot!!
i hope receives a lot high valuable advices from u!!
thank you.hihi
dear grown!! hi wellcome!
thank you.i'm very happyComment
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This is quite nice work for your first postings! like it was said before there are a few areas for improvement.
The wood texture needs to be addressed since it is all going the same direction even though the structure itself is going differently. It is a small thing but does stand out.
The water does draw your eye away since it does not look right.
One last thing is the green painted wall could use a bit less reflection.
Overall you should be very happy with this though.
If you are looking for models of any kind you can look at www.formfonts.com.
Best regards,
ScottComment
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luu,
of course i know you Mr Cat.
one thing really i admire on these images is the flow of space from inside out....
the post process is good. the lighting is Excellent. Tv reflection, center table glass.. very good.
there some things that you need to look at...
1. your blurry reflections.... these one will really kill your render time. are they really necessary to do apply this in all most of your materials (ceiling, pictures) although they are nice, the tendency is it will create much noise... while im saying this, i myself doesnot really know how to decrease the noisy effect using IR+LC combo. (anyone???) of course my quick guess is reducing the noise, but maybe there are some other workaround.
2. texture. especially the wood grain, in reality, those wood grain will never be parallel. (wood frames). Those pillows were just so reflective.
3. Plants. need to put better texture... there is also another plant coming out from the wall. (image2)
overall Good Job.Comment
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