Skylighted Concourse Updated

[Free Agent_cg]

I built this from a hand sketch i found in an architecture book
C&C welcome...

nobody say anything about decor and furniture im working on another version

( i removed the image so this page wouldnt take so long to load )

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse

The overall illumination levels and the feel of the scene look good to me.
My only suggestion at this stage would be to adjust the angle of the sun so that it is more oblique - so avoiding the first impressions that the shadows are inclined panels. As an experiment, you might also try softening the shadows a little (increase the sun size multiplier to say about 3)

Good luck

David

[Free Agent_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse

thanx David i'll try that in the next version
heres the sketch i built it from

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse

wow. im happy that the images being posted on this site are keep on improving.. free agent you are really putting the standard higher.

[tibor2]

Re: Skylighted Concourse

Those stairs are to narrow, it looks like only one person at a time can use them.
Make them wider.

Still nice looking render

[mikaztro]

Re: Skylighted Concourse

Your render looks better than the sketched one.
Do you know Helmut Jacoby? I think you will certainly like his work and probably can render/remake his classic renderings.

[Free Agent_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

ok stairs are wider... added planters and furniture... and signature for that professional look tried changing the sun angle but nothing pleased me and it didnt bother me too much in the first place... :P

C&C wanted... want to make this the render of all renders, theres alot of noise in the corners how do i get rid of that? i pushed up HSP subdivs but it didnt fix it....

[thecleaner]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

Everyone wearing all black gives this a Matrix feel. Overall nice work.

Scott

[kwistenbiebel1]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

Looking good Freeagent
I agree that a softer sun would be nice (sun size multiplier set to 5 or even 10 ?).
What 3d people collection did you use?


Cheers,
Biebel

[Free Agent_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

my office finally bought a couple sets of the AXYZ-design people, one casual and one bisiness... i'll try softening up the sun... :

[Free Agent_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

woohoo update... C&C please ;D
i like the feeling of this one...

[thecleaner]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

Really nice!!!

Scott

[Vodka79]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

would you be kind enough to share your settings?

[alq]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

free,
i like the soft shadow...nice one...keep on inspiring us man.....



alq....

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: Skylighted Concourse Updated

This is looking much better (although it was good before). I think the darker sky is allowing the reflections in the roof to show up better, and I am glad to see the angle of the shadows changed and softened. My only suggestion now would be the people. They all look a little purposeful - determindly walking straight along - I suggest you need at least one couple just stood there talking, or looking over the balcony as in the sketch.
I do like the bump texture etc. - it has really come to life.

Good Luck

David