Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

[santos]

A Proposal for Dubai Sports City Main Office
Design by Bersun Erturk and JDS of ITD







Regards JDS ill post a better render soon
www.santosjdportfolio.blogspot.com

[camionero]

Re: Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

Did you model it on Sketchup ?? how ?? have any tutorial???

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

Jeff

all looks very good.
Just one point - the 'bunker' outside and its flag, could do with a bit more work, although I must say I wouldn't know how to improve it!
As usual the images look a lot better than the real thing.

Regards

David

[madmax_cg]

Re: Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

I agree...everything looks good

I AM NO EXPERT BUT I WOULD DO THE FOLLOWING:
I would add some reflections to the bluish panels on the exterior perspective and maybe change the grass texture...also the golf flag is somehow out of place??
Also the reflections on the glass look like its a night pic (maybe im mistaken)

[santos]

Re: Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

yes i done it all in sketchup vray for su


but im not the one who worked the photoshop of it . my co/architect because of lack of time
thanks for the crits ill post my final render soon...

[tibor2]

Re: Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

there is something wrong with the stairs, i think rise is to big, like every step has 1 m or something.

Other than that it looks great, so keep on making these beautifull renders.

[santos]

Re: Just a Conceptual Proposal C&C are most welcome

huh? riser 1m? are you sure? i dont think so.