Work in progress

[stefanq]

Hello everyone,
this is not a real project, just something to test
what I learned so far, and still not finished,I will add
more furniture, and decorations, and maybe I will try
to make a carpet (never try one to do).
So.. I can wait to complete this one, but very curious
about other opinion, so your C&C are welcome.
All the comments helped me so much, so thanks to all!

[santos]

Re: Work in progress

ok im the first one heheheh

1.) can you make the map of the yellow wall smaller? so that the bump and the repetition of the texture will not be obvious

2.) try to make your floor not so blurry maybe higher the gloosy and a little less in ior

3.) ok everything is nice but if you like to make a drama to this render try to soften your shadows
go to the setting environment then check the intensity... make it 10 im not sure its the lowest among the 3 as far as i can remember.. im in a netshop thats why i cant check it. just change 1 to 10

4 at the lower right of your image there is some image errors right? it means it needs light
try to use vray rec invinsible but less intensity just to add extra light and im sure it will make your render more clear

5 about your background can you adjust it in ps using brightness and contrast

6 im confused is that a door or a big window? bec. its look like a big window to me.. and if its only a window i think there is a wasted space , just try to arrange the plan i think.. besides its not a real project...
7 increase your marble wall reflection just a little


doing good bro.... keep it up

for those other post i got no time to make comments ,if you got some questions ask me from my post then i can answer all in just one thread.....thanks and regards jds

[stefanq]

Re: Work in progress

Thanks for comment Jeff!
I didn't notes that repetition of the texture,to be honest...you are definitely right about that.The floor has 5 on IOR,don't remember what push me to do that,
and near that big window, I plan to put an relax chair, and maybe some plants,
but I'm not shore if I can manage to get it right.
And shore I'll try to make more dramatic lightning scheme, I believe this is
my most important goal.
Thanks again for your time man, I know you are busy...really nice of you supporting us to make it better .
Regards,
Stefan