pop art bed room

[lydiafelicia]

hello,
this is my first render posting
c&c

[migz_cg]

Re: pop art bed room

hi there, welcome to the forum
reattaching this work, is worthy for a first render..
i just think,some of us here becomes reluctant to visit an external link just to see the beauty of it..heheh

here's my crit,
1. u got some burnt issues, try to lessen light multiplier, if not adjust the relection mult(reflectivity color to grey i think) of the material.

2.love the first image, especially the carpet, lighting; and its clean..i just hope that bed is strong enough to stand,especially those two green objects above, with just the steel's support...

3.ow,i think u forgot to make ur lights invisible in the last image..

that's it..ill leave the other crits from the masters here..heheh

keep it up!

[stefanq]

Re: pop art bed room

Welcome, first of all!
WOW! Bold colors! I really like it, so 'vivid' renderings!
Try to remove the reflection on the wall materials, in the second rendering.
The first bed looks like plastic, but everything else it's good. Nice materials, nice colors.
Regards,
Stefan

[lydiafelicia]

Re: pop art bed room

thank you very much for the critics.
i'll try better for next posting.

those images are my first rendering which use physical camera.
and i have some problems with local lighting such as in second rendering.