trying to post my 1st post

[vhin042003]

hi im new su+vray..any comments here

[mikaztro]

Re: trying to post my 1st post

Nice try Vino.

Here are some suggestions:

- the background image is a bit high. Adjust it according to the SU horizon line.
- the lamp's bracket needs some smoothing.
- try to use arroway wood planks for floors instead. www.arroway.de
- it would be nicer if the sun's ray entered the room

The clip map kid and the guitar looks cool. Kudos!

[vhin042003]

Re: trying to post my 1st post

tnx again mike..my problem here is my sun shadow was not appear outside the window..i remove my refraction layer but noting was happen..help me to fix this problem...
wat can i do to add a smooth in lamps bracket?
the kid was a rpc in ps..i use ps for this hehehe..try to use rpc in ps..hehehe..tnx

[stefanq]

Re: trying to post my 1st post

Hi vhin. I'll try myself to give you some constructive critics like Mike.
First, about those shadows, sometimes it is helping to go to the GI(Skylight) and push the update button. Of course, you have to use sketchup shadows, and to have "default lights" on, in the Global Switches.Also, you could remove the reflections from the wall ( I never put reflections on them, but that it's a personal choice), and try to do something with geometry of the windows, to make them more realistic, and put some geometry as well on the ceiling, above those nice lamps. The floor material it's OK, just scale a little bit down the texture (pattern). And the wooden bed should have some reflections ( try 1.3 IOR,and 0.85 on refl. glossiness).
OK, that's all( for now ) ) just an advice, don't give up old scenes, try to improve them as much as you can, because if you do that, next time when you make a new one, you will do a better job, and of course you will have other issues ( I hope not), but no problem, this forum it's full with nice people, and always you will have support.
Good rendering!
Stefan

[teofas]

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hello vhin, i think your on the right direction brother, you render its looking good, the observations given by the mike and stef i think that can help a lot, its nice to see how more and more people its entering this forum, keep on the good work brother.

[vhin042003]

Re: trying to post my 1st post

tnx stepanq and teofas for your concern...i dond use reflection in my wall..im too confuse because the sun shadow was not appear..i know ders more i need to learn bout su+vray..next year is my thesis..and im happy that you give me a ideal to learn more in su+vray..
tnx a lot..
i will post my update regards on all your concern...tnx

[nektares]

Re: trying to post my 1st post

Is that wine on the top of the bed?? that kid has problems haha.
not bad at all, but the image of the exterior has a wrong tilt, it looks
like the house has a weird inclination. nice render man, but still you
have to make stuff "smoother"

[vhin042003]

Re: trying to post my 1st post (update regards on your comments)

hi this is my update..the sun now is comming to my room..i change the floor finish..comments are always welcome..IMG]http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn221/vhin042003/BEDROOMUPDATE.jpg[/IMG]