exterior rendering

[lydiafelicia]

hello,
this is my first posting for exterior rendering
c&c and critics are very welcome....

[teofas]

Re: exterior rendering

hello, and welcome to the forum, if this is your first post its not bad, but i think there are a few details that you can improve.
1-your busher or plants are floating.
and 2-the textures need more work, cause they look very flat, and some of them not realistic.

Your car paint its looking OK, exterior renders are not easy to do, so theres credit to your work, i know you can improve your render so lets see some updates. with practice, and reading posts on this forum you will achive very good results, welcome to the family... ;D

[ckosio_cg]

Re: exterior rendering

learning is not overnight...

keep on working on it. ;D

[lydiafelicia]

Re: exterior rendering

here is my first revision for my exterior rendering
i'm focus about lighting.

critics are very very very welcome..... ;D

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: exterior rendering

lydiafelicia
This is looking better. I suggest 3 things:-

1 At this viewing distance I would model the roof tiles - it will look a whole lot better, or you could use displacement (search the forum for 'displacement' and ' roof tiles')
2 I would get a more realistic background. A bit less sky and more tree line etc.
3 You need to get some larger, better quality textures, so that they don't show tiling patterns. cgtextures.com are very good, but will need some PS work to make them tile.

David