Public Building

[40th]

C&C are welcome

Front


Rear

[JudgeBao]

Re: Public Building

just put some framing on glass to make it more realistic.. ;D

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: Public Building

judge,

the 2nd image rendering and composition is excellent. you set up the camera, and you have great success in using those diagonal lines leading to the building thats really good. i also like the shadow caasting with those group of people and at the same time placing another isolated guy stiing on the left corner, thats a pretty good balance of composition. Now for the first image, i think its the opposite. you need to work out the composition. the ambient ligthing is too warm and dull. those plants mmm? im not sure though, the fountain seems floating and the reflection is unrealistic.

[40th]

Re: Public Building

just put some framing on glass to make it more realistic.. ;D

JudgeBao,
Thank you for the comment
The idea of the curtain wall is that the framing is on the internal side of the building. I will try to put the framing so it will be visible from outside view.

judge,

the 2nd image rendering and composition is excellent. you set up the camera, and you have great success in using those diagonal lines leading to the building thats really good. i also like the shadow caasting with those group of people and at the same time placing another isolated guy stiing on the left corner, thats a pretty good balance of composition. Now for the first image, i think its the opposite. you need to work out the composition. the ambient ligthing is too warm and dull. those plants mmm? im not sure though, the fountain seems floating and the reflection is unrealistic.

nomeradona,
Thank you for your comments, they are very 'eye lightning'. I'll work on the composition of the 2nd image.
I'll post the resoults as soon as i finish.

[40th]

Re: Public Building

Here is the updated scene.
Full view

[nomeradona_cg]

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excellent, the last image is absolutely much much better. is it possible to share your visopt on the last image? just for comparison study.

[JudgeBao]

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Great image. I have a question, are the reflections are billboards or in the environment slots? I cannot do the same reflection as in yours.

[40th]

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nomeradona,
Thanks a lot, below are the visopt that i used.

JudgeBao,
Thanx, the reflections are billboards, see the 2nd image below

VISOPT



Billboards

[40th]

Re: Public Building

i've made spaces between the glass divisions because the framing is on the internal side.

p.s. i used windowiser script for this, took seconds to make the glass spaces.

[stefanq]

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This one it's more "vivid", I don't know if you modified something...but I can't really give you a good critic, because exteriors are for me a virgin land , if I can say so... I know interior are easy..so congratulation for your work. Those ruby's are.. something, I'm using lot's of them myself.
Cheers!

[andeciuala]

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very nice enviroment tecnic.

[40th]

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stefanq,
Thanx man. This time I used a bit different adjustments in Photoshop.

andeciuala,
Thank you, i hope to keep improve my scenes in future, and your comments were very helpful.

[nomeradona_cg]

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i like your layout the 40th. and its really a good way on maximising the strength of su, and lo man vray is very powerful in acquiring environmental reflection very effective.

perhaps my request for to help other guys here is to make a small tutorial about this and put it on the tutorial section. im sure this posting will be forgotten, but there is a huge thing here which would be beneficial to everyone. hope you dont mind.

[40th]

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nomeradona,
Thanks for the appreciation, it realy means a lot to me.
I'm not sure that i undrstood what the TUTorial should be about?

[nomeradona_cg]

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that reflection of those block houses....(see your set up) bill boards with all those houses. the title is how to get realistic reflection by adding those block houses around.
of course hdri is one thing, but your set up i find it useful too.