simple exterior proposal

[santos]

heres a proposal of a small house extension.... its a 8 x 9m single detached. and needs to be extended (renovate)

here's my exterior proposal

interior will follow soon
hope you like it guys

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: simple exterior proposal

Very nice - I like the little touches - the bike against the wall.
Personally I would tone down the bump on the render, but everything else is spot on - nice shadows.

David

[santos]

Re: simple exterior proposal

OMG! i havent noticed since you commented... my stone displacement is inverted .ill repost the revised one in a moment

[stefanq]

Re: simple exterior proposal

Very nice Jeff!

[santos]

Re: simple exterior proposal

ok here's the revised stone....

but i need advise which is better this one which is correct or the one i posted on top

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: simple exterior proposal

Jeff
I prefer the sharp jagged stone of the first one.
(still not sure about the render though - bit 'lumpy' for my liking!)

David

[JCowdrick]

Re: simple exterior proposal

I think dcauldwell is referring to the bump on the fence and white overhang. Maybe tone it down a bit, as it does look a little unnatural. Otherwise great job. I love the shadows and overall look.

JCowdrick

[steelers05]

Re: simple exterior proposal

Liking the images, but I have to agree that the white areas are a little too bumpy. Also, thae black reflections on the gates and fencing look a little too diffused and it almost makes them not look like metal (if thats wat they are supposed to be?). Im just being nit picky, because these are really nice images though.

[andeciuala]

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wow man, greaaat work, i like most the firs image, the contrast, shadows etc. I like the bump on your gate too.

[santos]

Re: simple exterior proposal

Jeff
I prefer the sharp jagged stone of the first one.
(still not sure about the render though - bit 'lumpy' for my liking!)

David

me too ;D

[quote=JCowdrick ]
I think dcauldwell is referring to the bump on the fence and white overhang. Maybe tone it down a bit, as it does look a little unnatural. Otherwise great job. I love the shadows and overall look


i may agree that its big but it happens in real life... thanks for the honest comment cheers

Liking the images, but I have to agree that the white areas are a little too bumpy. Also, thae black reflections on the gates and fencing look a little too diffused and it almost makes them not look like metal (if thats wat they are supposed to be?). Im just being nit picky, because these are really nice images though.

ok maybe your right but here in may pc and ll of us here thinks its fine (its a metal steel painted in glossy paint) thanks for your concern comment we will check the calibration again... many thanks dude cheers!!! ;D

wow man, greaaat work, i like most the firs image, the contrast, shadows etc. I like the bump on your gate too.

thanks a lot dude.... ;D

[nomeradona_cg]

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very nice as usuall master jeffrey santos. i still like the inverted map displacement of the tiles. the shaddow accentuated the depth of some of the tiles.

[Esref]

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Excellent......i like the windows in the back and the reflections! did you do much post processing?

[santos]

Re: simple exterior proposal

Excellent......i like the windows in the back and the reflections! did you do much post processing?

nope.. only the dof and a little bit of contrast