Some practice

[gamore]

recently,i learn Vray for sketchup by myself,and sometimes it is really hard to understand.
This is a practice .


Photoshop

[teofas]

Re: Some practice

welcome bro, i learn a little by myself, and when i enter this forum i learn so much, people like nomer, ande, of course stefanq, david, and others are always willing to help. feel at home ;D

[40th]

Re: Some practice

Welcome Gamore,
Few comments on your render:
1. The view of the windows is unlikely to be just sky and clouds (unless it's a flying house)
2. I noticed the picture on the shelf disappeared, try to explode it (it will turn in to a material)
3. Sofas got nice texture except of two, witch it seems scaled out by mistake.
4. Add bump map to the floor.
5. The books are missing color/texture

Very good start,

Best regards

[gamore]

Re: Some practice

en, i see. Thanks a lot,40th

[artchung]

Re: Some practice

as first time render, i think it looks great!!! As Teafos said, some people are really helpful...keep posting & u'll improve day by day.

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: Some practice

i actually like the mixed media effect. if this is a practice and just learing vray 4su, i must say what a quick. and if this is an omen, i think this guys has a lot of potential... keep it up