ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

[teofas]

Hi, this is my last work, an exterior practice. any c&c are most welcome...




ok this is a first correction, still needs some work on ps, ill try to follow advices cause exteriors are my weakness...2nd correction will come soon.

[artchung]

Re: ExTeRioR

i like it overall. my only comment is the dark space is too dark. i would cheat a little bit by adding some artifical lights down @ the garage.

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: ExTeRioR

i did ot see the image yesterday, so i cannot comment. now i can see it. I must say your concrete material rocks dude. congratulations! your use of lighting is superb, although the size of the sun is too much for my liking. perhaps lower the camera into normal viewing angle and tweak more the glass material.

[teofas]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

thx for reply.

arthung: i try to follow your advice about cheating with some rect lights. thx.

Nomer: thx bro...i have found that physical camara parameters are one of the most important things for lightning...ill tweak the glass material on the second correction.

[artchung]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

Super!! Teofas. It looks much better & i love it.

[teofas]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

thx artchung, but i think i need a lot of improvements on exterior...will keep practicing.

[Moghamdi]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

Very nice.
Can you please share the white texture of the exterior wall?

[JHuman]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

I like the wood cladding on the 2nd image but do not like the shadows on it. I like the shadows on the first image. Just my opinion.

[goutham_cg]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

me too like the shadows on the first material..first one seems to be little more natural. in second one background trees are better than first,light inside the garage seems to be unnatural for the second one..but indeed great work ...continue.....

[teofas]

Re: ExTeRioR (Update 1st correction)

thx for replies,

moghamdi: the texture you can find it on cgtextures.com

Joe: yhx for your observations

goutham: yes i think that making shadow little stronger on 2nd image can improve it, thx for comment.