urban twilight

[arqestevez1]

hi to all.
this is my last sceene. hope you like it. critics are welcome

[gallystops]

Re: urban twilight

Great original background image! I loooove the feel i get.

Although i kind of get the feeling like i am too close to the chairs. Maybe there may be too much going on in the foreground?

I would love to get a better sense of height, give me a nice scare the second i look at the image. Maybe a different camera angle?

What is this space? Is it purely visual or did you get any inspiration?

I like the art. It is a nice image. Seems kiind of flat maybe? And the texture on the base molding seems a bit large in its scale? It reminds me of a similar problem i would get with UVMapping in 3ds Max.

But please don't take these remarks as negative! I love the originality and feeling i get from this image.
I would love to see an image that has a nice Depth of field application starting from up close and on top of the table that then fads into clarity towards that amazing sunset

Keep'em coming,
Great work!

-Gallystops-

[arqestevez1]

Re: urban twilight

hey gallystops. very nice critics.
actually i had already made this one, but had not posted it because i had not photoshoped it.
there's nothing else in the room because i was just trying to get some reflections in the window and at the same time being able to set some nice background.
by some reason, if i save the png, reflections don't appear, so i used an hdri and saved as jpeg.
hope you guys like this one.

[fpedrogo]

Re: urban twilight

I like it! But the position of the V-Ray sun (the reflection on the floor) do not match with the sun in the image.

Fer

[gallystops]

Re: urban twilight

totally love it!

I definitely feel like im a bout to fall off in this one. Good work

I love that background and i really like the DOF in this one. Next one i would love to see is one with more reflection. Just to compare and find a perfect fit for the image.

[DaveReyes]

Re: urban twilight

nicely done Omar, i like the way you manage the backgtounds reflections and dof, i need to learn that to bring more reality to my renders!!!!!

[arqestevez1]

Re: urban twilight

haha, thank you fernando, i was hoping that nobody see that about the shadow
am very glad you like it...
dave, we still have some business to do hehe
here's another one.

...i would have liked to use some high pollygon instead... btw... cups on the table are floating