Latest work! Apartment mirador

[DaveReyes]

lately im having travel with my current laptop the battery dont work anymore i have to used it conect to the energy and my laptop its not a core duo and my ram its not enough im saving some cash to buy a new one feedback how can i choose a great computer for running the su and vray will be great. This a apartment located in a high terrain with view to the city. critics and comment are welcome!.





fish eye view!

[arqestevez1]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

hey dave, what's up dude?
it's looking pretty cool. my only comment would be about background. i think it should be brighter... if it is an hdri just increase background's multiplier.
last sceene is really cool. i liked your wood floor, and chairs actually look very well mapped, but i think it would even look better with some depth of view on that one...
see you around

[teofas]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

dave your renders are getting better and better, congrats bro!

[frip51]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

nice!

my two cents:
- use more different books on the shelf
- rework wood texture mappings (fibre directions on table-legs and on chair-backs should be upright)
- turn down reflexions and/or bumps on wood materials a bit, looks a little artificial to me

keep up the good work, mate

[DaveReyes]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

thank you for the comments guys! really aprecite them.
matias: Yea man you are right in the wood table i forget to change the position texture. Yes i need to add more difrents books, reflections are good for me but im going to take that in mind.

[DaveReyes]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

Omar hello dude, man lately i havent connect to the msn, and im having problems with my computer. Thank for the comments my friend!

Teofas: thank you for your comments. but my current computer its giving me a lot of problems and i need to advanced with the su and vray.

[40th]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

Good render!
As been said here, the Bg should be brighter and the books needs more work. Also noticed in the bottom rail poll you left the glass clippers (but there's no glass since it's the beginning of the rail)

Great to see your improvement.
Keep on the good work.

[DaveReyes]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

thank for the comment 40th, yes you noticed that i forget to take off those glass clippers jejejeje! its true my friend no more glass we dont need to waste money in two more clippers.
ILL post the improvement sooner.

[DaveReyes]

Re: Latest work! Apartment mirador

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