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  • nom nom nom... a kitchen :D

    bonjour heres a quick kitchen ive been working on as i was bored

    it was googling about and i saw it so i thought might as well give it a go

    hope you like it ;D



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    Great work! A lot of people have trouble losing their details when there is a ton of white involved but you have done a great job keeping the balance. Are those chairs original or warehouse?

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      Good one!
      Very fresh lighting, clean composition - bring it on!
      I like it!


      If you're still bored, why not tweak a little?

      - Fridge seems to open to the wrong side, swap handles to the right
      - What has happened to the second drawer? ...it looks darker than the others
      - If it's red wine, darken it a bit - this looks more like watery syrup
      - Wooden floor is too glossy, appears to be synthetic now
      - Adding some little greens in a pot or so could still improve the scene (IMO)

      Keep up that good work!


      Cheers,
      matthias

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      • #4
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        Yeah i like how simple and clean these are...the wood looks nice but it has a plasticy feel to it. keep up the good work

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        • #5
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          wow..so clean, the wood floor looks good, but i'm agree with matthias and steeler, it's al lil' bit glossy...
          i also like the steel that you used in the pots, all that stuff!!! cool!!
          congrats!!

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          • #6
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            Very very nice.
            I second Matthias suggestions. And add that the bump could be toned down - appear too strong. Least half the strength.
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            • #7
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              very nice :P
              los campeones no nacen, se hacen...

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              • #8
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                I agree with maathias

                my additions

                interior shadows too blurry
                sky is too bright it appears you are either in a skyscraper or on the edge of a cliff in countryside
                change the material of knife handles a bit

                personally I am not good at interior shots, I will try improving my quality to reach you people
                nice renders
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