university office (UPDATED)

[arqestevez1]

hi to all. this is my last night's work. it's part of a re construction project in my ex university
feel free to comment.

[-Keith]

Re: university office

Hello Omar really great work! I would like to see the contrast turned down on that decal though I think its a little too bold to look real.

[ken28875]

Re: university office

Wow, really nice render, Omar.

Best,

_KN

[luis agamez]

Re: university office

nice render omar!!!! cool one!!

[pacha]

Re: university office

Hola Omar,

Siempre veo tu trabajo y me gusta.
Veo que tienes un nombre árabe y me parece que tu vivas en un paÃs de habla española. ¿Puedo saber dónde vivas??

Mantenga anuncio, no seas perezoso como yo. ;D

[arqestevez1]

Re: university office

hey guys, thankyou very much for your comments.
alrami: yeah, i also believe that it needs less contrast, but i can't understand the other part ;D hehehe... i guess i need some translator
pacha: muchas gracias por tu comentario, soy de Tuxpan, Veracruz en Mexico.

i hoping to post the second part tomorrow.
saludos!

[DaveReyes]

Re: university office

nicely done Omar, i always admire you renders you have a great quality. The only thing that you should improve its the noise on corners of the walls for thr rest great!

[artupato]

Re: university office

hey guys, thankyou very much for your comments.
alrami: yeah, i also believe that it needs less contrast, but i can't understand the other part ;D hehehe... i guess i need some translator

I think he is only referring to your decal
anyways, great render! the texture on the floor tile looks nice.
the decal on the glass bothers me. hehe alrami is correct saying "its a little too bold to look real"

[steel.monkee]

Re: university office

maybe you could add lens shift to fix verticals?

tiles are looking good.

question: are the chicks 2d?

[arqestevez1]

Re: university office

thank you very much for taking the time to comment.
i just finished another sceene, and i didn't really have time to add gadgets, or chairs to the glass table, but i am hopping to improve both images for my personal portfolio once i get some time for myself, so feel free to comment, even design advices, cause this is just finished for now

and, monkey... yeah, they are 2d people. you can download them from here http://forum.asgvis.com/index.php?topic=7598.0 i also uploaded alpha map