my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

[dwanimations]

Hi all... SECOND ONE IS THE UPDATE

This is my version of the Ronen Bekerman...


Feedback and suggestions most welcome

[gallystops]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

Great curtains, clouds are beautiful. I like the stones too. Were a lot of the textures done in photoshop?

[ozanb]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

try to improve the pool material

[teofas]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

hi DW nice work bro but i think the pool water needs to improve, for me it looks too white maybe some more transparency can help i also dont know what is the white thing near the chairs on the background, are they some bushes? any way nice job.

Hey something i notice is that in the second image, we have the same idea of making it kind of a marina, check out my version of this model on my gallery bro! i think we are mind conected hehe.

greetings!

[dwanimations]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

I agree whit the pool material... can sombody post some screendumps of water texture settings..

[stefanq]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

Hi DW! Nice render! The concrete map looks scaled too much. The chairs near the pool need a not so perfect white color (not 255 value)
As for the water, check this post where I was tryed wather for the first time. I don't remember the setings, but I know that I use what that guy shared. Good luck!
http://forum.asgvis.com/index.php?topic=6011.0

[40th]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

Nice renders.
As been said the water should be more transparent and the white colors are burned out.

[dwanimations]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

I am working on the water at this moment

[dwanimations]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

what do you all think about the new pool material

[ozanb]

Re: my version of the contest of Ronen Bekerman

nice update
lower the intensity of white material
pool material better than before but not great