Duplex

[40th]

I've reverted to VfS 1.05.30.
Nothing special about those exteriors, just want to get a feed back.
The backgrounds are from the actual site environment.

[dwanimations]

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Hi 40TH

Ok renders

I would check the background images from renders 1 and 3 ... The perspective is do different from the render I think. in render 1 the background image looks that is has a scale that is to large.. render 3 gives me the same feeling.

The PS palm in the render 1 looks a bit flat.. ( I think If you make it some what lighter It will come out better, of make a part lighter thats in the sun that way you get a ). I have the same feeling on the cactus in the #4 render..

I hope you find my feedback useful

btw.. love the PS background in the second render...

[teofas]

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hi 40th i have to agree with DW, i think you can make it much better than this, ive seen other works from you and there are pretty amazing even more your interiors, so in this ones i think some things need to be corrected, anyway nice post!

[stefanq]

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Nice renders! The second one looks fantastic to me, maybe because of the vegetation...I think.
Congrats!

[40th]

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Teo, Stefan and DW, thanks for your comments.
About the background you're absolutely right they've been shot from a human POV and the renders are more birds eye view so there's not much that I could do about it.
With this renders my main focus was the Illumination, exposure and color mapping settings. what do you think about it?

[40th]

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Here comes the Interiors...

[DaveReyes]

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beautyful renders 40th, i like your style> the room its exceleent i like the walking closet the wood its great i like the reflections could you share the setting how you achieve refl. on woods. Ill prefer different arts on the room something more artistic those you have are commercial, art paintings bring personality to your design could be something modern and abstract! Light in the room would be better if its natural, emmesive its to excessive you have a great light source on you backgrounds let that light touch your room. imo natural light its more beutyful than artificial, and youy have a beatyful design there

Living room its great my friend im loving these minutes that im watching your renders. I noticed that your translucent panels on stairs are withuot strcture the most fall easely so in order to add more reality why you dont use some clips to support the panels !
Great job.

[40th]

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Thanks Dave for the kind words.
The artificial lights are just for interest and more dramatic image the illumination is mostly through GI and VraySky.
About the glass rail, I know what you mean. It was exactly what I thought when I saw at first, but it has an appeal to it. Maybe the next one I'll do as you suggested.

I always look for new artworks, where do you get yours?

[DaveReyes]

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http://efren-medina.artelista.com/

take a look on that link this my favorite artist, and you can see a lot of hes painting here!
actually there are a lot of artist on that link, just tweak and you will see great arts.

[arqestevez1]

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wow, reaaallly good work, specially the last one... actually, the only thing that looks fake is the plant, but all the rest is reaally fine, so... as everybody says:
great work bro!

[teofas]

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the interiors are great my friend!! but we know you can do very nice interiors, now lets improve the exteriors to have the complete package!! ;D

great job bro!!

[stefanq]

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That's just brilliant, man! I love the materials (excellent)! The brown glass it's just glass with fog?
It seams tricky to me this kind of look, with correct color , transparency and reflection.
Congrats!

[40th]

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@Dave,
Thanks bro, Ill check it out.

@Teo,
Heh... :P I try my best did you noticed the leafs on the pavement ;D? Do you have a constructive notes for my exteriors? thanks for the comments my man!

@Stefan
First, thank you.
And yes the brown glass is refraction with a fog color. I used the green glass material that comes with vray and tweaked it.

@Arqestevez,
Thanks. I was actualy more worried for the girl to fit well in to the scene and not look fake. so if it's only the tree for you I'm happy

[fpedrogo]

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I love the second interior! Very realistic materials!

[teofas]

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hehe, your right bro, i shoud not give critics without a constructive coment :-[ sorry for that bro....i think that in the exteriors the glass of the windows should reflect the enviroment maybe the reflection of trees or buildings on the windows can give more life to the exterior renders, also the photos you use to the background they look to big in relation of the render scale, the wall material looks to repetitive, in render #3 the background is to desaturated in comparation of the render wich has more contrast, the wood material is also repetitive as the wall stone material, the render is not bad bro, but i think you can improve your materials on exterior so they can look as awsome as the ones on the interior,,,i know exteriors are harder than interiors but i have faith on you my brother!! sorry if im to picky, but im just saying this with good intentions