New bedroom design updated and my first DOF

[DaveReyes]

DOF



http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5295/dofps2.png




http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8816/doftestps.png

critics and comment are welcome!


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[arqestevez1]

Re: New bedroom design first poposal

hi dave... you're improving with each new render...
i liked your lamps and wood floor.
keep improving

[edenux]

Re: New bedroom design first poposal

Hi.

I like your render, but I can see a few mistakes. Firstly, the lighting is good, but white light coming from left ark do not match there, it brings my eyes exacly on the wall, not furtinure, or maybe all render. Try to expose most important things. The floor material can be better, and a bed is too wide. Thats all for this time. Keep posting and good luck.


Edenux

[DaveReyes]

Re: New bedroom design first poposal

Thanks for the comments and its true and the arc of the left wall its coming a diferrent light.

[DaveReyes]

Re: New bedroom design

[sebekf]

Re: New bedroom design

I like the lights and atmosphere of the room. Nice render . I think perspective is too wide.

[Yanman]

Re: New bedroom design

Good job Nice render.

[Jaktarn]

Re: New bedroom design

Like it. Is the carpet pattern bubble wrap?

[DaveReyes]

Re: New bedroom design

jaktarn, thanks for the comments and yes i was trying to achieve bubble patern in order to have a relaxing carpet and more confort, i have seen them on real life and they are great

[Chisel]

Re: New bedroom design

really nice image but the thing that really don't match is that the angle of the light cast on the wall to the right of the image does not match the low angle sun of the sunset background image use a softer more diffused lighting setup and it will be mush better. good job and keep posting.

[DaveReyes]

Re: New bedroom design update!

Update renders
hope its good. critics and comments pleas!
This is for my porftfolio that im creating.



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[DaveReyes]

Re: New bedroom design updated and my first DOF

[arqestevez1]

Re: New bedroom design updated and my first DOF

yeaaaah man :P
greaat renders. i see you finally achieved doff effect.
congrats

[DaveReyes]

Re: New bedroom design updated and my first DOF

Omar thank you for sharing your knowladge, actually you are my dof teacher!!!

[40th]

Re: New bedroom design updated and my first DOF

That book on the shelf is upside down
In the last image the sun direction doesn't fits the BG's sun location.

Nice renders Dave!