Another Residential

[40th]

New exterior. Please comment. Constructive notes are very welcome.

[robert111]

Re: Another Residential

very nice render , i like your grass , how did you do to have a nice grass???

[40th]

Re: Another Residential

Thanks Robert.
It's Micha's method: http://forum.asgvis.com/index.php?Itemid=90&topic=2320. note that it doesn't work on vfs 1.48.66 (a bug)

[arqestevez1]

Re: Another Residential

it´s a cool render, it just seems that the building is not really on the grass... perhaps it needs a little more post work to make them match...
impresive work

[40th]

Re: Another Residential

it´s a cool render, it just seems that the building is not really on the grass... perhaps it needs a little more post work to make them match...
impresive work

Thanks for the comments. Good eye on the grass. I've retouched it and updated the image.

[steelers05]

Re: Another Residential

40th...looking really good, especially your stone materials. A suggestion would be maybe blurring out the shrubs in the foreground of the second image. It could give a nice effect and help blend them a bit better, because now I think they are bit distracting and stand out too much from the rest of the scene. One other thing....what is going on with the third window from the right in the 2nd image?.... Is that some sort of open shutter? Im not going to say its wrong, but Im just having a hard time understanding what is going on ther. But good work my friend, i really like the design too.

[40th]

Re: Another Residential

Thanks man!
Those are white curtains similar to all my previous interiors and exteriors. Maybe from this far it's not that clear but it's there behind the reflecting glass.
I like the idea of blurring the bushes to mimic a DOF and to get the focus on the building. So here's the fix. I like it, thanks steeler.

P.s and congrats on the asgvis featuring your kitchen render for advertising and such.

[steelers05]

Re: Another Residential

thanks 40th, im glad I was able to contribute to the asgvis team. I like the image a lot better with the blur ajustment you made....its just subtle enough to focus your eye on the building while still keeping enough detail to see the shrubs. But the windows I was talking about are actaully the 2nd ones from the right ...not the glass doors with the curtains...I was able to make those out quite nicely. Again, great job though.

[40th]

Re: Another Residential

Yeah, the blur is nice touch indeed tnx for the tip
Oh you mean that window. It's a tree reflection :