perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

[aufifillah alwi]

just recovering from awful critics....owh what the heck....

the title for the project is green office...and my project doesnt seems like it.
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[aufifillah alwi]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

sry if the pic is too big... i dont know how to thumbnailed it....
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d*mn it how to do this?

[gallystops]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

The night shot is your most compelling! Good work. The angle in the first image is a bit off. I would like to have seen a higher perspective in the first image or something. All in all, i like the set. Its great to see how others incorporate V-RAY!

Keep it up.

-Gallystops-

[aufifillah alwi]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

thx... thats the problem when you r doing work under pressure of time...see my photomatched perspective it looked out of scale... the building shuld be about 3-4 floors

[LorenzoS]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

good work!
I really like the net-surface, how is it done?

[agucasta89]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

Excellent! How old are you? I´m in 3rd year Architecture in Argentina, Im 20 years old. This render is perfect! How many time do you use Vray?

[arqestevez1]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

hey, that's a really cool work...
i think the night sceene is by far the best. the others need a little more work in photoshop to make them look like they're really in there...
i think you should be more positive, i'll post some images of when i was in the third year of architecture hehehe, and i promise you'll laugh.
perhaps you could share some more info about your project and all the architects here could give you some advices also.
have fun.
grettings from mexico.

[aufifillah alwi]

Re: perspectives for my 3rd year final project...

@sera: the net surface i do it with sketchup, not with alpha mapped texture....... it make my skp model so damn lag whenever i try to rotate it sktchup
@agucast89: im 23 and im still in 3rd year architecture in malaysia...damn this course cause me so much pain...but i like it i take 1 year off during the 5th semester before continuing,because of heart attack!!, hahahahah... and i learn vray during that 1 year off

@arqestevez1: its a green building office set up near the urban fabric, it supposed to be a benchmark office for others to follow.... but i think i failed on this....
one of my critic said my building look like a big steel cage forcing the worker to work in sweat-shop like office.... heh... sure got C on this.