my daugther's bedroom

[averoez]

Hi Community!
Attached a scene I made for personal use, plz c&c are welcomed

[DaveReyes]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

good, but you need to improve your quality walls have to much noise and wood floor needs more subdivision, did you use post process and if you did in my opinion to much cromatic aberriation. i guess that your visopt options are providing to the scene low quality and those windows are wear i mean the background, and something very important that its a kids room and really needs more light and expose happiness on the colors! . keep posting and improving! the toys are incredible where do you get does models?

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

Is this meant to be viewed with 3d glasses?
The slight red/green shift, especially in the foreground, makes it look like it would look interesting thro 3d glasses.

David

[averoez]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

Thanks for comments, attached an updated version :

[edenux]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

I like this render, expecially lighting. But try to work on image sampler settings and improve some of the materials, etc.: wooden floor.

What kind of lighting this render is based?


Edenux

[arqestevez1]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

hi.
i believe it is a good render, but there's something wrong with the quality... if i stare at the pinguin, or if i try to focus the bear on the table i feel like i'm going to have a headache... it's like our sceene is not focused... or... you used too much chromatic aberration in photoshop.
nice start

[averoez]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

Thanks to everybody for your comments and good critics,
I tried to update my scene accordingly, here 2 new tests :


BTW, I was wondering how long does it take depending on your configuration to render a picture of 1280px * 960px?

Have a nice day

[dcauldwell_cg]

Re: my daugther's bedroom

Averoez

BTW, I was wondering how long does it take depending on your configuration to render a picture of 1280px * 960px?

Too many variables to give answer to this, computer, lighting, displacement, bumps, reflections - do you want me to go on!
So if I said about 8 mins, would that really mean anything?

David